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Array ( [sid] => 95012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Happened One Day... [time] => 2005-05-19 15:50:02 [hometext] => its kinda romantic one...but really differnt [bodytext] => It was a dark night,having mischieviously cold breeze;
There was no one around and all motions were freezed.

Then he went near her and the curtains blew;
And in her breath was trepidation for seconds very few.

The clock struck twelve and the night professed darkness;
They were close together and there was calmness.

He kissed her lips passionately and she was consonant;
It appeared he was a connoisseur with sentiments..!!

Time had limits so they had to curtail..
Both the souls flew back where their lives had failed..!!!

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It Happened One Day...

Contributed by Anu on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 03:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

It was a dark night,having mischieviously cold breeze;
There was no one around and all motions were freezed.

Then he went near her and the curtains blew;
And in her breath was trepidation for seconds very few.

The clock struck twelve and the night professed darkness;
They were close together and there was calmness.

He kissed her lips passionately and she was consonant;
It appeared he was a connoisseur with sentiments..!!

Time had limits so they had to curtail..
Both the souls flew back where their lives had failed..!!!

Copyright © Anu ... [ 2005-05-19 15:50:02]
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Re: It Happened One Day... (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:23:16 PM AEST
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short and sweet. i like it and think you did a very good job! keep writing. (love the vocab!)

Re: It Happened One Day... (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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A nice atmosphere. Keep it up!

Andrew

Re: It Happened One Day... (User Rating: 1 )
by phaNeo on Sunday, 17th August 2008 @ 01:05:04 AM AEST
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This piece definitely proves how talented this person must be. simple yet so complex atmosphere.the luv in the air can actually be felt in this poem. and the last line definitely takes the entire poem into a whole new state; the luv n romance between two souls dat cudnt become 1 while alive...in the words of such a talented writer.i simply luv this 1

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