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Array ( [sid] => 94982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Whitehaven By Night Revisited [time] => 2005-05-19 11:05:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Souped up car, drum & bass blaring
Drowns out those trying to sing
Tom Jones or Elvis, drunk pub karaoke

Girls in mini skirts, brave cold sea breze
Whistling at shirted guys, trying to tease
Before falling over drunk and laughing

Kebab shop queue, primal need for greasy mess
Curry sauce drips down some skimpy dress
As she shouts taxi in middle of road

Two tall guys stare, curse and swear
While their girls just pull hair
Others form a circle, swaggering circus clowns

Police van waits watching on standby
While heartbroken one begins to cry
Her guys gone off, some best mate!

Smashed up bottles of cheap nasty beer
Litter the floor like diamonds clear
While girl vomits on someones doorstep

Thousands of years of civilisation
And this is a night of fun in our nation?
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Whitehaven By Night Revisited

Contributed by adsalamon on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:05:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Souped up car, drum & bass blaring
Drowns out those trying to sing
Tom Jones or Elvis, drunk pub karaoke

Girls in mini skirts, brave cold sea breze
Whistling at shirted guys, trying to tease
Before falling over drunk and laughing

Kebab shop queue, primal need for greasy mess
Curry sauce drips down some skimpy dress
As she shouts taxi in middle of road

Two tall guys stare, curse and swear
While their girls just pull hair
Others form a circle, swaggering circus clowns

Police van waits watching on standby
While heartbroken one begins to cry
Her guys gone off, some best mate!

Smashed up bottles of cheap nasty beer
Litter the floor like diamonds clear
While girl vomits on someones doorstep

Thousands of years of civilisation
And this is a night of fun in our nation?

Copyright © adsalamon ... [ 2005-05-19 11:05:09]
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Re: Whitehaven By Night Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 07:07:08 PM AEST
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This could be my town your talking about. So true and so sad. In fact this could be almost any town or city in the Uk. Christopher.

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