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Array ( [sid] => 94962 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Back to the future [time] => 2005-05-19 07:33:51 [hometext] => this poem is directed to my father [bodytext] => I think about my future
and i want back my past
but then i remember
so not long does it last

i remember the way it made me feel
the yelling and the screaming left me standing in tears

it made me want to run away
but even when you weren't there
i didn't want to stay

you left us once
you left us twice
the third time you left
it wasn't so nice

the first two times
i was too young to know
but I'm older now
do you think i don't know

you ****ed up big time
now its time to fess up
you're the main reason
I'm so messed up

you wont admit it
but you know I'm right
cause the way you left us
it just wasn't right

you don't know what happened to me
while you where gone
the things that she said to me
where so very wrong

you lie to me
day after day
you say to me things
you shouldn't say

so when i think about my past
at first i want it back
but that doesn't last

cause then i remember
the way i would feel
every night when you where fighting
while i stood there in tears

the lies and the secrets
i hear from day to day
soon they will not bother me
cause soon I'm goin' away

away from all my troubles
away from all my pain
away into my future
whatever it may be

i don't know where I'm going
but its far from where Ive been
where ever it may be

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato


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Back to the future

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 07:33:51 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



I think about my future
and i want back my past
but then i remember
so not long does it last

i remember the way it made me feel
the yelling and the screaming left me standing in tears

it made me want to run away
but even when you weren't there
i didn't want to stay

you left us once
you left us twice
the third time you left
it wasn't so nice

the first two times
i was too young to know
but I'm older now
do you think i don't know

you ****ed up big time
now its time to fess up
you're the main reason
I'm so messed up

you wont admit it
but you know I'm right
cause the way you left us
it just wasn't right

you don't know what happened to me
while you where gone
the things that she said to me
where so very wrong

you lie to me
day after day
you say to me things
you shouldn't say

so when i think about my past
at first i want it back
but that doesn't last

cause then i remember
the way i would feel
every night when you where fighting
while i stood there in tears

the lies and the secrets
i hear from day to day
soon they will not bother me
cause soon I'm goin' away

away from all my troubles
away from all my pain
away into my future
whatever it may be

i don't know where I'm going
but its far from where Ive been
where ever it may be

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato






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Re: Back to the future (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:49:24 AM AEST
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Painful and deep. very good though. I felt your emotions lash out and it moved me emotionally. great write.

blessed be
christina




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