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Array ( [sid] => 94942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => pile of nonsense [time] => 2005-05-18 21:57:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => prickly feeling
shoots thru my nerves
down my spine
failure
nothing more
can i do any less
then what i have

so much more

going and moving
and seeing and doing
lost in a lazy world
that keeps me from pursuing
i will be nothing more
than what i am today
but i can dream
and lie
to make it seem another way

so much to change

feeling out of control
falling down the same path
having to claw my way back
leaving behind so much

forgetting all i know

moving away from what once was
thinking at first
its the right thing
i have been wrong before
i do the same things
in different places
with different faces

dejavu

running around the same excuses
keeping people near
without any uses
except their mission
is to hurt me

but i keep them close

i let them in
to hurt and steal
but thinking this time
its a different reel
and different script
and a different scene

same ****, different place

i thought i knew
what i wanted
but it changes
like the weather
no clue what it is today
maybe ill wake tomorrow
and know
know all
know the world and happiness and love
and to know how it feels
not to want or need or long
for much
if anything at all



[comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 61 [informant] => candi [notes] => |||||||Partially edited out, due to use of letters to indicate a banned word. Please refer to site rules, and ensure that, in future, all letters of banned words are deleted prior to submission. Thank you. ---Moderator_14||||||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
pile of nonsense

Contributed by candi on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



prickly feeling
shoots thru my nerves
down my spine
failure
nothing more
can i do any less
then what i have

so much more

going and moving
and seeing and doing
lost in a lazy world
that keeps me from pursuing
i will be nothing more
than what i am today
but i can dream
and lie
to make it seem another way

so much to change

feeling out of control
falling down the same path
having to claw my way back
leaving behind so much

forgetting all i know

moving away from what once was
thinking at first
its the right thing
i have been wrong before
i do the same things
in different places
with different faces

dejavu

running around the same excuses
keeping people near
without any uses
except their mission
is to hurt me

but i keep them close

i let them in
to hurt and steal
but thinking this time
its a different reel
and different script
and a different scene

same ****, different place

i thought i knew
what i wanted
but it changes
like the weather
no clue what it is today
maybe ill wake tomorrow
and know
know all
know the world and happiness and love
and to know how it feels
not to want or need or long
for much
if anything at all







Copyright © candi ... [ 2005-05-18 21:57:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: pile of nonsense (User Rating: 1 )
by vox on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:14:35 PM AEST
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good work.




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