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Array ( [sid] => 94939 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => From Heaven Into Suicide [time] => 2005-05-18 21:28:42 [hometext] => I saw the title 'Last Glimpse of Heaven' and this is the scinerio that popped into my mind. Then I had that song by Eminem about his daughter off his new cd stuck in my head. So it, kinda has that rhythm... (I'm feeling just fine, thank you very much...) [bodytext] => I take my last glimpse of heaven
as I stare into her eyes
and pray that she’ll forgive me
in-spite of all the lies.

Man all the pills in that bottle that I took
seem to be draining my life, really really quickly
I just pray that when I die
people don’t think that I was crazy

Cuz that’s the worst fear that I have
to lose the last thing I got
after all I’d lost my soul,
Just tryin’ to take hold of what I sought.

But when I look into her face
I begin to think that
I have just fallen from grace.

Oh God what have I done to you my dear?
Just please kiss away this one last tear. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 36 [informant] => WorthlesSanity666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
From Heaven Into Suicide

Contributed by WorthlesSanity666 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:28:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I take my last glimpse of heaven
as I stare into her eyes
and pray that she’ll forgive me
in-spite of all the lies.

Man all the pills in that bottle that I took
seem to be draining my life, really really quickly
I just pray that when I die
people don’t think that I was crazy

Cuz that’s the worst fear that I have
to lose the last thing I got
after all I’d lost my soul,
Just tryin’ to take hold of what I sought.

But when I look into her face
I begin to think that
I have just fallen from grace.

Oh God what have I done to you my dear?
Just please kiss away this one last tear.




Copyright © WorthlesSanity666 ... [ 2005-05-18 21:28:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: From Heaven Into Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:12:05 PM AEST
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was this suppossed to be like a song

That eminem put out.. just wondering..


nice poem..


Re: From Heaven Into Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 08:46:55 AM AEST
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You are very talented I love your work....I have read of posted here but did not comment on all..But all that I read is really nice work..




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