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Array ( [sid] => 94915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2005-05-18 19:21:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cried myself to sleep thinking about you
Thinking about the sad times we’ve been through

The way I’d be sad and you wouldn’t even care
But my best friend, you cared for her and that is not fair

Now these tears, they are caused by you
As a sword pierces my heart all the way through

Love, I think doesn’t very much like me
Because of that my heart is locked and someone lost the key

But I like you so much
It’s really not right for me to do such

I just wish you could hold me tight
Tell me that everything is all right

But in my dreams I see you pulling away
And my throat is caught no words for me to say

Even now my tears fall as fast as my dream’s tears
I just wish that you could take away all these fears.

Now I’m used to my damp pillow.
Closing my eyes thinking of how your voice sounded so comforting when you said “hello.”

I lay here hugging my pillow at night
Shivering and trembling of being alone, and that’s my fright

But now instead of you saying hello I want you to lie
I want you to lie and say goodbye

Even though you’re so close…I miss you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Agaryulnaer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
You

Contributed by Agaryulnaer on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I cried myself to sleep thinking about you
Thinking about the sad times we’ve been through

The way I’d be sad and you wouldn’t even care
But my best friend, you cared for her and that is not fair

Now these tears, they are caused by you
As a sword pierces my heart all the way through

Love, I think doesn’t very much like me
Because of that my heart is locked and someone lost the key

But I like you so much
It’s really not right for me to do such

I just wish you could hold me tight
Tell me that everything is all right

But in my dreams I see you pulling away
And my throat is caught no words for me to say

Even now my tears fall as fast as my dream’s tears
I just wish that you could take away all these fears.

Now I’m used to my damp pillow.
Closing my eyes thinking of how your voice sounded so comforting when you said “hello.”

I lay here hugging my pillow at night
Shivering and trembling of being alone, and that’s my fright

But now instead of you saying hello I want you to lie
I want you to lie and say goodbye

Even though you’re so close…I miss you




Copyright © Agaryulnaer ... [ 2005-05-18 19:21:32]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by 03614 on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 06:19:09 AM AEST
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Wow... the first line of this poem captured me and as i continued reading on, i just felt curious to read the whole poem. This was a very heart-felt poem. I loved it. (I hv felt lik dis once so i know very deeply wot u meant)




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