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Array ( [sid] => 94899 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MYSTERY VISITOR [time] => 2005-05-18 17:44:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A lingering darkness hovering above me
a mist, a vision of something unclear;
This apparition of black mass flowing freely
looking down into my soul teasing my fear;
The chilling air sets over my flesh and bones
tearing at my mind and gripping my heart;
A ghostly figure, a trespasser who will not go
always with me here at night to play his part;
A flowing spirit to tease me as I lie
a mystery visitor that does not speak to me;
Just another mental tormentor of my soul
that vanishes at light until next I sleep. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 48 [informant] => kydistortion69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

MYSTERY VISITOR

Contributed by kydistortion69 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A lingering darkness hovering above me
a mist, a vision of something unclear;
This apparition of black mass flowing freely
looking down into my soul teasing my fear;
The chilling air sets over my flesh and bones
tearing at my mind and gripping my heart;
A ghostly figure, a trespasser who will not go
always with me here at night to play his part;
A flowing spirit to tease me as I lie
a mystery visitor that does not speak to me;
Just another mental tormentor of my soul
that vanishes at light until next I sleep.

Copyright © kydistortion69 ... [ 2005-05-18 17:44:17]
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Re: MYSTERY VISITOR (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:09:57 PM AEST
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i like it!!! great job!! :)

Re: MYSTERY VISITOR (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:07:26 AM AEST
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A mist a vision of something unclear
I love this line
Wonderfuly done my friend
sakes alive I gave a five

Sinned

Re: MYSTERY VISITOR (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:56:58 PM AEST
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wonderful write..
write on my friend
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: MYSTERY VISITOR (User Rating: 1 )
by detourchick on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 07:21:49 AM AEST
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great imagery good wirte

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