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Array ( [sid] => 94859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Questions of Pain [time] => 2005-05-18 10:59:22 [hometext] => Self struggle well I'm here in Iraq. Comments on this write would be great....Steve [bodytext] =>

Why do we live
And why must we die
What does God have
Planed for are lives
Why do we suffer
And why must we breath

I wish sometimes
My breath would leave
That God would strike
The life from me
So I can loss this Pain
and all this greed

Its hard to walk
As my knees get week
From my life of pain
And my life of grief
I need my strength
For my hearts gone week

Now I look to heaven and I start to yell
I curse God for this life of hell
Why must we live and why must we die
Why does God play with our ***** up lives
I know He smiles when He sees my grief
And ***** with my pain as He watches me bleed

I loved God once
and I loved His Son
But He turned His back
now I’m hold this knife
For in hate I live and in hate I breath
For the Lord has walk away from me

What is the answer
For I’ve last my pride
I’ve lost my hope
And I’ve lost my mind
I want to die and get it done
For my legs are tired from this run

As I sink the knife into my skin
when I pull it out I’ll reach the end
With a bubble of blood
my life is through
Now I’m lost to life
And I’m lost to you

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Questions of Pain

Contributed by sride686 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 10:59:22 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Why do we live
And why must we die
What does God have
Planed for are lives
Why do we suffer
And why must we breath

I wish sometimes
My breath would leave
That God would strike
The life from me
So I can loss this Pain
and all this greed

Its hard to walk
As my knees get week
From my life of pain
And my life of grief
I need my strength
For my hearts gone week

Now I look to heaven and I start to yell
I curse God for this life of hell
Why must we live and why must we die
Why does God play with our ***** up lives
I know He smiles when He sees my grief
And ***** with my pain as He watches me bleed

I loved God once
and I loved His Son
But He turned His back
now I’m hold this knife
For in hate I live and in hate I breath
For the Lord has walk away from me

What is the answer
For I’ve last my pride
I’ve lost my hope
And I’ve lost my mind
I want to die and get it done
For my legs are tired from this run

As I sink the knife into my skin
when I pull it out I’ll reach the end
With a bubble of blood
my life is through
Now I’m lost to life
And I’m lost to you

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-05-18 10:59:22]
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Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:24:54 AM AEST
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Wow, this was definitely a shout out to life's misery! I applaud your expressiveness and choice of imagery; and i thought the ending was particularly strong. Keep them coming and stay strong. dwayne

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:53:57 AM AEST
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Hard-hitting poem Steve. I'm glad to see your bout of writers block has come to an end, but very sad to hear of your struggles...Stay strong my friend. I imagine that's harder to do with each day that passes, but try to hang in there...Take Care, Scorp.

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:17:30 PM AEST
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hard hitting I cant imagine how hard it is over there and the sadness and torment that you endure I commend you for what your doing and Im sorry that its so extreme for you.Stay safe and hang in there I know your strong
Michelle

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:44:01 PM AEST
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sorry about your pain steve good poem of

self struggle and expressions of emotion,

wish u all the best, stay safe . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 12:58:21 PM AEST
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I don't believe He's turned his back on you, nor you Him. I think He is just obscured by your inner turmoil. Hold on as you must endure all this struggle, make it home safe, where you can put all of this behind you. He does have His arms outstretch to you, and always will. In your time of suffering, it is He that will release your pain. God bless you for your strong write and write it all out so somewhere you may find a light at the end of the tunnel.
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:31:16 PM AEST
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a very hard hitting and deep write, very well expressed. well done!

pix xx

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:39:46 AM AEST
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awww you poor thing hugs.
It must be awful to be there .
I will be praying for your safe return.
awsome write.

Re: Questions of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 03:49:35 PM AEST
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Oh wow...Hang in there steve..You have to have faith in yourself #1..
Your vision will become clear when you look into your heart.
Just believe and good things will follow...*sigh* is a beautiful write..
~~~Michelle~~~

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