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Array ( [sid] => 94835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => kill me, just kill me and quit toying with me...... [time] => 2005-05-18 02:19:30 [hometext] => death is to prevalent in my life, i suffer from death after death yet none is my own. [bodytext] => GOD... why do you do this to me?
what have i done? or what is it i will do
i gave my ***** soul to you
yet you keep testing me like you do
i would have given up long ago if i dident believe in you
i have mindless tears forming
freeing

f
a
l
l
i
n
g

to join me on the ground
were i will now stay
what is the use of standing
to be knocked down the next day?
would it matter?
....................of course not
for all the love i have for you
i hate you even more
but you love me...
so that makes it all better right?
....................of course not [comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => socialmisfit [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

kill me, just kill me and quit toying with me......

Contributed by socialmisfit on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:19:30 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

GOD... why do you do this to me?
what have i done? or what is it i will do
i gave my ***** soul to you
yet you keep testing me like you do
i would have given up long ago if i dident believe in you
i have mindless tears forming
freeing

f
a
l
l
i
n
g

to join me on the ground
were i will now stay
what is the use of standing
to be knocked down the next day?
would it matter?
....................of course not
for all the love i have for you
i hate you even more
but you love me...
so that makes it all better right?
....................of course not

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-05-18 02:19:30]
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Re: kill me, just kill me and quit toying with me...... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:32:20 AM AEST
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Very creativly written.
God only wants good for all. A God of luv only gives luv. Sometimes he says no for our own benifit. You may not understand it now and may never but if you'll notice when bad days come there will always be a brighter day.
God don't have to test us cause he created us.
Hang in there my friend and I'll be back soon.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: kill me, just kill me and quit toying with me...... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:54:23 AM AEST
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emotional hope all is well

Re: kill me, just kill me and quit toying with me...... (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:38:50 AM AEST
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I know how you feel!

good poem! :)

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