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Array ( [sid] => 94761 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => against free will: I LOVE YOU [time] => 2005-05-17 17:00:43 [hometext] => well i dont know what to say about my own poems cause i dont know if it is bad or good i guess thats up to you guys [bodytext] => I sware i dremt of you every night
i thought you were my shining light
i loved it when you held me close
out of everyone you i chose
we kissed a few smiles wide
but all i wanted was to hide
then you left to love someone else
my life crumbled and fell to hell
then i just wanted to see you smile
and for you to be happy for just a while
but lately ive been thinking of you
wondering if it was ever true
thinking what if you werent here
then all of a sudden it was clear
i hated you, your fated screams
why do you stay in my dreams
please just go away leave me be
bloody tears i dont want you to see
dont bug me with your retched voice
loving you is not a choice
you hate me but do you love me still
loving against your own free will
dont worry i dont deserve your love
i dont need your warming hugs
i just wish for a kiss once more
but you are leaving through my door
please dont leave i love you still
i love you against my own free will
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against free will: I LOVE YOU

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sware i dremt of you every night
i thought you were my shining light
i loved it when you held me close
out of everyone you i chose
we kissed a few smiles wide
but all i wanted was to hide
then you left to love someone else
my life crumbled and fell to hell
then i just wanted to see you smile
and for you to be happy for just a while
but lately ive been thinking of you
wondering if it was ever true
thinking what if you werent here
then all of a sudden it was clear
i hated you, your fated screams
why do you stay in my dreams
please just go away leave me be
bloody tears i dont want you to see
dont bug me with your retched voice
loving you is not a choice
you hate me but do you love me still
loving against your own free will
dont worry i dont deserve your love
i dont need your warming hugs
i just wish for a kiss once more
but you are leaving through my door
please dont leave i love you still
i love you against my own free will




Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-05-17 17:00:43]
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Re: against free will: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:41:49 PM AEST
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not bad but it confused the hell outta me good write


Re: against free will: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:05:44 PM AEST
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That was a really good poem i thought, it reminds me exactly of what i went through with my ex, we broke up like 9 months ago and i still love him and its not wrong to still love him, its just how you feel in your heart and you cant change that, i mean i have only seen my true love once in my life, but he is still my one and only true love, if you feel so strong about him you should not say you want him out of your life, cuz when he is out of your life your gonna wish he was back in your life, so just keep him in your heart even though your not together with him. Kimmie


Re: against free will: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomad062303 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:50:40 PM AEST
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i dont see how this could confuse anyone... i loved this poem i could relate so much. a year ago me and my ex broke up, and it tears me up to see him, but the thing is i still ove him. he did me so bad, and everything, and i tend to think that i am the one who is so stuck and cant let go. i dont understand myself and my own feelings... obviously this heart ache inspires my writing. keep it up.

~Ashley


Re: against free will: I LOVE YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:50:05 PM AEST
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another one i liked,straight from your heart huh?i understood perfectly and relate a hella lot to hit,lol.It's all blended,and doesnt confuse me,give u props*,lol.t/c.
your friend,
Andrea




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