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Array ( [sid] => 94711 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Poems [time] => 2005-05-17 06:40:09 [hometext] => This is a hint. [bodytext] => My poems, my poems, ah Wolfareen's poems
What can one really say?
They may not be the best
But they're getting very lonely,
Very introverted, feeble and grey.
Nobody likes them
They are so unloved
No reviews, day after day.
If you could give just one
It'd perk them right up
Put a smile on their faces like a ray
Of sunshine which they have not seen for so long,
Buried down in the dark and the gloom,
Their muted voices hushing now
Only one chance to blossom and bloom. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Wolfareen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Poems

Contributed by Wolfareen on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:40:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

My poems, my poems, ah Wolfareen's poems
What can one really say?
They may not be the best
But they're getting very lonely,
Very introverted, feeble and grey.
Nobody likes them
They are so unloved
No reviews, day after day.
If you could give just one
It'd perk them right up
Put a smile on their faces like a ray
Of sunshine which they have not seen for so long,
Buried down in the dark and the gloom,
Their muted voices hushing now
Only one chance to blossom and bloom.

Copyright © Wolfareen ... [ 2005-05-17 06:40:09]
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Re: My Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:18:45 AM AEST
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Okay, okay, hint taken! Actually, I liked this one, picturing all those attention-craving posts just waiting for a few drops of praise. I truly sympathise; I feel the same way just about everytime I log on. Please don't get dispirited - I think your poems are worth reading.

This site is a fickle one for comments and grading, but it is very interactive and allows you to be creative with your posts (pictures, music). Maybe if you add some pictures to "lift" your poems image a bit? just a suggestion, but they can add to the overall effect.

I posted a comment on your obsessive love piece as well - now that was especially strong and genuine.

Spike

Re: My Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:40:27 AM AEST
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good poem i liked it::) I thought it was cute!

Re: My Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by chefhmboyrd on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:57:39 AM AEST
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yes we all crave attention Wolfy, why do you think we are here. I like it, I want attention too.

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