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Soon I will be taking my last breath.

I never thought things would get so bad.

But living is just making me go mad.

I know I will go 2 hell.

But its gotta be better than ending up in a padded cell.

Now is my time 2 die.

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My last goodbye!

Contributed by Kazzy1231 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:46:30 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'm going 2 starve myself 2 death.

Soon I will be taking my last breath.

I never thought things would get so bad.

But living is just making me go mad.

I know I will go 2 hell.

But its gotta be better than ending up in a padded cell.

Now is my time 2 die.

Here is my last goodbye!

Copyright © Kazzy1231 ... [ 2005-05-17 05:46:30]
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Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:24:31 AM AEST
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This is really tragic and sad. Hope it's not true. killing yourself is not the answer.

Hope everything works out for you,

Jane xxx

Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:46:03 AM AEST
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This is really a sad poem! i hope it isnt true cause if you kill yourself you go to hell! hope everything works out for you. if you need a friend i am here:)but it was a good poem!

hugsssssss butterflygirl40

Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:07:07 AM AEST
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Very emotional write. That's a pretty torturous way to go...I hope you realize whatever hurt and pain you're experiencing now will go away sooner than you think, and suicide doesn't have to be the answer.

Scorp.

Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by death_not_be_feared on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:54:39 PM AEST
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dont even think about it.u are worth so much u dont have to die it wont solve anything u will suffer so much more.dont do it ur a great poet please if u need to talk im here.

~Savannah

Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:35:04 PM AEST
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i kno the feeling...
good poem

megs.
ps u can always talk to me if ya need to

Re: My last goodbye! (User Rating: 1 )
by jheng on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST
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wow! such a powerful poem, but dont do it in action ,,,, ending one's life is not the answer, though i often thought if it too when i was younger. be brave ...

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