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Array ( [sid] => 94707 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => this is my goodbye [time] => 2005-05-17 04:52:31 [hometext] => i have made up my mind to uproot myself and change my life by moving out of state to find who i am again.. so i said good by in this letter [bodytext] => I have made up my mind
and nothing more for you to find
so don't search for me i am gone
and love in my heart i have none

packed up all my things and i am leaving
i have no more reasons to stay here
momma told me go get you life clear
no don't say i am fleeing
i dont see no healing if i stay
since you walked away

i gave you every ounce of my love unending
i gave you every ounce of my trust depleting
life here has no meaning
so this is why i am leaving

dont search for me in this town
don't worry you let me down
my love is gone
my heart is empty
my life here is over

this is my good bye to you
one who loved me and left me blue
not one tear will i cry
as this is my goodbye [comments] => 8 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 52 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

this is my goodbye

Contributed by brokenwings on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 04:52:31 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I have made up my mind
and nothing more for you to find
so don't search for me i am gone
and love in my heart i have none

packed up all my things and i am leaving
i have no more reasons to stay here
momma told me go get you life clear
no don't say i am fleeing
i dont see no healing if i stay
since you walked away

i gave you every ounce of my love unending
i gave you every ounce of my trust depleting
life here has no meaning
so this is why i am leaving

dont search for me in this town
don't worry you let me down
my love is gone
my heart is empty
my life here is over

this is my good bye to you
one who loved me and left me blue
not one tear will i cry
as this is my goodbye

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-05-17 04:52:31]
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Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:20:19 AM AEST
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Brokenwings

This is a sorry tell. So sad. I wish you well.
You may run,but you can't hide.
Feelings stay deep inside.
In time they will fade.
You will have happier days.
Remember if you can,
There is not a woman that needs a man.
I speak to you as a caring friend.

Sinned

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:40:09 AM AEST
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Interesting poem
I hope things get better for you
Good luck in rediscovering yourself
Nice Write

~Dawn

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:48:25 AM AEST
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Great write! i hope things get better for you! good luck.

hugsssssssss .

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:20:04 AM AEST
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A sad write showing so much emotion and sadness. Hope everything goes well with you.

Jane xxx

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomad062303 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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i like this... i love it. so expressive, and the sequence. This is really inspiring

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:02:19 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem...I especially like the line "I gave you every ounce of my trust depleting..." I hope you find much happiness in your new surroundings...

Scorp.

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 12:44:39 PM AEST
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very sad but full of hope sometimes picking up and making a move is the best thing for the soul and new change breaths life back into things.I wish you luck on your journies
Michelle

Re: this is my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:02:42 PM AEST
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Tasha, this is another sad write.
But sometimes picking up and going to a different place can you help you to forget the past, and remember :"Variety is the Spice of Life........I hope you find whatever it is you are looking for.
This was a great poem for your reasons, and I felt your forlorning greatly.
Hugs to you
And Warm Love
consue

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