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Array ( [sid] => 9459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => This Road [time] => 2002-12-30 10:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this because it feels like I'm on this road alone and I need to be there...and I'm talking to my unborn baby...and I'm wondering if I'll have the chance to meet my baby girl or not due to these complications. It's weighing me down...and I feel I did something so wrong..but I didn't and I don't know if this is how my life is to really go if I were to lose the baby. I just want to hold on to this forever...because I'll never be able to replace it.*cries*....it shouldn't be like this...it just shouldn't. I usually never make a title for the poem until the end...and the title hardly fits the poem...sorry bout that.





[bodytext] => Lately all I want is to be alone
And now I no longer answer the phone
I sit and I think of how to make things right
Of what to change and what to keep tight
If I change one thing would it mean a great deal
And would it leave my heart empty with nothing to feel
This sensation that I've drowned and can't swim anymore
Has now become my enemy and I can't fight the war
Each path I turn to puts me behind
It's a corn maze that is now in my mind
Each wall is built up so you can't see the next
Where do I get answers? Is there some written text?
I now turn the corner of the road with no lines
Perhaps I have to realize that these are the times.
I look up to the sun and I see something bright
Wishing that would lead me out of this fight
The sun is now setting and I see the first star
The journey behind me, I've come so far
Is this hope for me that I'll get to the gold
Will I travel rainbows before it's mine to hold?
I know things are hard and it's me that does possess
Each consquence that came from every test.
I finally see you in the distance and hope we meet
And if we don't, my heart will hold you and you're little feet
You were that new chapter, something so great
And I hope god will explain this horrible fate.
Perhaps I will hold you and you're mother I'll be
I'll finally meet the baby that kicked in my tummy.
I just don't understand when I did everything right
To have things unexplained, it's all out of my might.
I need to be here I finally see
It's where life is making a nest for me
I'll walk back home now and think some more
The silence heard me right to my core.
I'll wait for my answers and I'll continue to pray
I hope this road keeps going, and I'll see you in May.
Hear me now baby girl, I love you so much
And only god knows if we'll get to touch.
I'm home now so I'll let you sleep
Thanks for this moment that I'll always keep.
This road means a lot to me
And so do you little baby. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Vixen99 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
This Road

Contributed by Vixen99 on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Lately all I want is to be alone
And now I no longer answer the phone
I sit and I think of how to make things right
Of what to change and what to keep tight
If I change one thing would it mean a great deal
And would it leave my heart empty with nothing to feel
This sensation that I've drowned and can't swim anymore
Has now become my enemy and I can't fight the war
Each path I turn to puts me behind
It's a corn maze that is now in my mind
Each wall is built up so you can't see the next
Where do I get answers? Is there some written text?
I now turn the corner of the road with no lines
Perhaps I have to realize that these are the times.
I look up to the sun and I see something bright
Wishing that would lead me out of this fight
The sun is now setting and I see the first star
The journey behind me, I've come so far
Is this hope for me that I'll get to the gold
Will I travel rainbows before it's mine to hold?
I know things are hard and it's me that does possess
Each consquence that came from every test.
I finally see you in the distance and hope we meet
And if we don't, my heart will hold you and you're little feet
You were that new chapter, something so great
And I hope god will explain this horrible fate.
Perhaps I will hold you and you're mother I'll be
I'll finally meet the baby that kicked in my tummy.
I just don't understand when I did everything right
To have things unexplained, it's all out of my might.
I need to be here I finally see
It's where life is making a nest for me
I'll walk back home now and think some more
The silence heard me right to my core.
I'll wait for my answers and I'll continue to pray
I hope this road keeps going, and I'll see you in May.
Hear me now baby girl, I love you so much
And only god knows if we'll get to touch.
I'm home now so I'll let you sleep
Thanks for this moment that I'll always keep.
This road means a lot to me
And so do you little baby.




Copyright © Vixen99 ... [ 2002-12-30 10:00:00]
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Re: This Road (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:12:45 AM AEST
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wishing you the best with your baby, the title was fine, thanks for sharing this one


Re: This Road (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 10:45:52 AM AEST
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Awww Vixen, this is so touching... I hope all goes well with your delivery and that you come out of your depressed mood soon...
Hugs,
Jenni


Re: This Road (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:16:38 AM AEST
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Awww.... I do hope you get to see her....
God Bless....


Re: This Road (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:22:59 PM AEST
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Vixen,I think you might be worrying for nothing but if your heart tells you something is wrong by all means GO GET CHECKED AGAIN GIRL! A mother just knows! So go & have them check the heart beat ! I know this will comfort you just hearing it! Good luck let us know! Christina


Re: This Road (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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My heart is right there with you Vixen..Just please lots of rest and plenty of water to drink and lots of long hot baths, take the most relaxing positions you can take and don't allow people to stress you or upset you during this 9 month time....this is a beautiful write and so very sad as well....keep your chin up girl...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.




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