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Array ( [sid] => 94589 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => On the Edge [time] => 2005-05-16 14:44:08 [hometext] => i was going through a depressing time when i wrote this. enjoy! [bodytext] => I cant breathe
im slipping away
I cant take it
not for another day

when i get home
I take a knife
and slit my wrists
to end my life

as I lay there
I do not feel
this seems like a dream
it doesnt seem real

the doctors voice
sounds loud and faint
he says Im gonna live
but I know I aint

my mom comes in
and sits in a chair
my dad follows
but doesnt seem to care

is this real
or is it in my head?
I slit my wrists
shouldnt I be dead?

my mom asked me
why I did this
I guess I did it
b/c i was *****

the next day at school
I realized what I had
I had friends that cared
my life isnt so bad

they asked me
what happened to my wrists
I told them my story
and how I was *****. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ilovecasey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
On the Edge

Contributed by ilovecasey on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I cant breathe
im slipping away
I cant take it
not for another day

when i get home
I take a knife
and slit my wrists
to end my life

as I lay there
I do not feel
this seems like a dream
it doesnt seem real

the doctors voice
sounds loud and faint
he says Im gonna live
but I know I aint

my mom comes in
and sits in a chair
my dad follows
but doesnt seem to care

is this real
or is it in my head?
I slit my wrists
shouldnt I be dead?

my mom asked me
why I did this
I guess I did it
b/c i was *****

the next day at school
I realized what I had
I had friends that cared
my life isnt so bad

they asked me
what happened to my wrists
I told them my story
and how I was *****.




Copyright © ilovecasey ... [ 2005-05-16 14:44:08]
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Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by ilovecasey on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:51:01 PM AEST
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i love my poem its one of my favorites. enjoy it.


Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:09:22 PM AEST
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This is sad but good!


Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by DoomedCuthulu on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:11:45 PM AEST
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Lucky person...


Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:22:03 PM AEST
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is this a true story?

... it's very inspiraional any way. i liked to read it, but it's so sad!


Re: On the Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by ilovecasey on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:45:22 PM AEST
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yes it is a true story of my life and what i went through.




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