Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:36:29 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 94557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The way i did [time] => 2005-05-16 07:00:21 [hometext] => for my ex who approched me and asked me to understand why he broke my heart... this is so painfull that i just had to write it down.. [bodytext] => I saw you last night and you smiled at me
like nothing has changed and we
were still in love with nothing to fear,
but i lost you sometime last year

you were all i ever wanted in my life
but you just couldn't love me the same way
i begged and pleaded for your to stay
but you still walked out of my life..

your smile warmed my heart and broke it in peices
slowly you walked my way and i wanted to run
but my legs wouldn't move and my eyes started to tear
you reached out to hug me... and i moved away
you looked surprised there was no love in my eyes

you asked me what has changed
i told you things will never be the same
you asked me to understand that you fell in love
how can i when all you love to me has only been a lie
you want me to accept you've walked away
my question is why don't you stay
stay away from me, stay out of my life
go ahead let her be your wife
she dont' love you the way i did
she'll never understand you
the way i did
and she'll never lose you
the way i did....

but you see what i did now
i walked away drying my own tears
you asked me where i was going
well wouldn't you like to know
all i can say is i let you go... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
The way i did

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 07:00:21 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I saw you last night and you smiled at me
like nothing has changed and we
were still in love with nothing to fear,
but i lost you sometime last year

you were all i ever wanted in my life
but you just couldn't love me the same way
i begged and pleaded for your to stay
but you still walked out of my life..

your smile warmed my heart and broke it in peices
slowly you walked my way and i wanted to run
but my legs wouldn't move and my eyes started to tear
you reached out to hug me... and i moved away
you looked surprised there was no love in my eyes

you asked me what has changed
i told you things will never be the same
you asked me to understand that you fell in love
how can i when all you love to me has only been a lie
you want me to accept you've walked away
my question is why don't you stay
stay away from me, stay out of my life
go ahead let her be your wife
she dont' love you the way i did
she'll never understand you
the way i did
and she'll never lose you
the way i did....

but you see what i did now
i walked away drying my own tears
you asked me where i was going
well wouldn't you like to know
all i can say is i let you go...




Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-05-16 07:00:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The way i did (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningGlory on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:08:32 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I am at a loss of words... This poem is so bitter-sweet. I really understand and like 'she'll never understand you the way I did and she'll never lose you the way I did'
Really nice.


Re: The way i did (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:34:28 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
you did good ..and .. be strong.. poem was nice..


Re: The way i did (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:41:42 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
awesome...awesome poem....you held me hanging on to every word...wish i had written this...cos it feels so familiar..

Love,
Umang


Re: The way i did (User Rating: 1 )
by imsorryulied on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:22:54 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
that has to hurt like knives into your heart i pray you move on and show him what he gave away..
may you find a love that will stay..




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com