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Black's so becoming
Silhouetting sadness.
White's the color of mourning
What you never had
In this world of nothingness.

The broken wings
Of the angel of happiness
Only brings
The death of her
Heaven shrouded in sinfulness.

I am silhouetted in black
For my little girl never to come back. [comments] => 11 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Only Little Girl

Contributed by Essentially9 on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My Only Little Girl

Black's so becoming
Silhouetting sadness.
White's the color of mourning
What you never had
In this world of nothingness.

The broken wings
Of the angel of happiness
Only brings
The death of her
Heaven shrouded in sinfulness.

I am silhouetted in black
For my little girl never to come back.

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2005-05-15 20:42:40]
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Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:59:14 PM AEST
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Well Jen..I have told you why I do not like this on already, but It still has a great ending...as always

~Clark

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:31:41 PM AEST
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this is sooo sad.... beautifully, mezmerizingly hauntingly excellent poem... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:49:16 PM AEST
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such saddness in this one

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 01:22:03 AM AEST
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This is heart breakingly sad and yet mesmerisingly beautiful..I love your poetry but this sadness is ever haunting..Venkat

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:43:20 AM AEST
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jus' the mere notion of ya sadness
leaves me in awe...
last stanza..

"I am silhouetted in black
For my little girl never to come back."

this moves me to tears...
so deep.. and very well written..
incredible!

M.O.H.

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:09:25 AM AEST
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Essentially9

In sadness there is light.
Your little girl now in the purest white.
Death of a child is the hardest thing.
Know that she now is an angel being.
Through death new angels are born.
In heaven happiness goes on and on.

Sinned

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 06:23:06 AM AEST
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What a sad tragic write, So full of descriptions and powerfull range. I like this Jen.

Jane xxx

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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such sadness and yet beautifuly written you

still know how to touch the heart . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:14:15 AM AEST
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The first line just amazed me and I loved
how the next line complimented it. The
imagery in this was stunning.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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Is this really about the death of a little girl?
Or is it about the loss of your own childhood?
Thought provoking and well written as always for you!

Re: My Only Little Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:13:27 AM AEST
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Very sad and moving, deep write. I liked it.

--amanda--

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