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Blood gushes from my eyes
The teardrop sharpened razor
I live until I die

No one to kiss the boo-boos
No one to hold my hand
No one to feel my pain
I'm living in the rain

Slow the beating of my heart
The cannon fire dulls
Thick blood within a bathtub
I live a life of lies

No one to kiss me good night
No one to tuck me in
No pills to keep me sane
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Rain

Contributed by Jimmato on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:04:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

To the sound of running water
Blood gushes from my eyes
The teardrop sharpened razor
I live until I die

No one to kiss the boo-boos
No one to hold my hand
No one to feel my pain
I'm living in the rain

Slow the beating of my heart
The cannon fire dulls
Thick blood within a bathtub
I live a life of lies

No one to kiss me good night
No one to tuck me in
No pills to keep me sane
I'm living in the rain

Copyright © Jimmato ... [ 2005-05-15 19:04:43]
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Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:08:23 PM AEST
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I really like the metophore here."im living in the rain"...Awesome poetry and great job

~Clark

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:13:01 PM AEST
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wow that is rilly gud, i like it a lot. youre a brilliant writer, keep it up. i can relate to this a lot.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 08:56:28 PM AEST
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good write. full of power. i can relate to it. i wish i could help you, if you ever need anyone to talk to, PM me. no one should have to suffer like this. hope it works out ok.

~sprints

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:03:27 AM AEST
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your words cut me in half..
I feel ya..
peace to you

M.O.H.

Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:13:00 AM AEST
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very powerfull wite, i loved the metaphore. this is an awsome poem.

SM

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