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Array ( [sid] => 94484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mommy Me [time] => 2005-05-15 18:11:40 [hometext] => I wrote this about my siblings and our kinda relationship. I wrote this a year ago and alot has changed since then. I still do live at home. [bodytext] => Nobody wants to be me,
Nobody should be.
I am raising three kids who aren't mine biologically.
Going to School strieveing for A's.
Wondering How many more days?
Am I left on this Earth to make you feel proud.
Of how I made your kids turn out.
When you take all the credit.
Your four year old son calls me mommy.
I changed his diapers and taught him how to use the potty.
When there bad I can't help but be sad.
I'm such a failure I can't be a mom.
I'm 16 years old I can't raise kids.
I have so many problems of my own.
I'm not their mother,
I'm their sister simply a friend at hand.
I'm not always going to be there.
I'm moving out soon.
I love them to death don't get me wrong.
I'm done being mommy all day long. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Deep_Within_My_Heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Mommy Me

Contributed by Deep_Within_My_Heart on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:11:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Nobody wants to be me,
Nobody should be.
I am raising three kids who aren't mine biologically.
Going to School strieveing for A's.
Wondering How many more days?
Am I left on this Earth to make you feel proud.
Of how I made your kids turn out.
When you take all the credit.
Your four year old son calls me mommy.
I changed his diapers and taught him how to use the potty.
When there bad I can't help but be sad.
I'm such a failure I can't be a mom.
I'm 16 years old I can't raise kids.
I have so many problems of my own.
I'm not their mother,
I'm their sister simply a friend at hand.
I'm not always going to be there.
I'm moving out soon.
I love them to death don't get me wrong.
I'm done being mommy all day long.

Copyright © Deep_Within_My_Heart ... [ 2005-05-15 18:11:40]
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Re: Mommy Me (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:47:43 PM AEST
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hmm.. You should not have to go through this at this age.. I hope things are getting better with you.. nice poem =)

Re: Mommy Me (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:05:08 AM AEST
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Only winners can raise kids,& it sounds like to me you're well on your way! If they call you mommy,then I'd say your the keepers of their little hearts!! You did this at age 16,alot of parents,care givers can't acomplish that during their whole life!!! You may have problems of your own(who doesn't)but it sounds like you took care of theirs first!!!! To me that spells,WINNER!!!!! Keep it going & keep on showing!!!!!!

DAN!!!!!!!

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