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Is what first made me notice you
But then I started noticing
All the caring things you do

Something in your eyes
Shows me it still ok to yearn
You do so much for others
Asking nothing in return

Something in your eyes
Says that things will be alright
If I can make it through today
I just may see those eyes tonight

Something in your eyes
Tells me things aren’t so bad
Sometimes we just won’t get
What we just aren’t meant to have

Yet something in your eyes
Changes when you see his face…
I see the look you get
And how none could take his place

Something in your eyes
Shows how much you care for him
So I must hide this longing
And keep it deep within

Something in your eyes
Showed me from the very start
The path for me is blocked
That leads to your heart

So I'll stay hidden in his shadow
Trying hard to hide my sighs
Hoping one day I could be
Something in your eyes...

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Something in your eyes...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 01:57:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Something in your eyes
Is what first made me notice you
But then I started noticing
All the caring things you do

Something in your eyes
Shows me it still ok to yearn
You do so much for others
Asking nothing in return

Something in your eyes
Says that things will be alright
If I can make it through today
I just may see those eyes tonight

Something in your eyes
Tells me things aren’t so bad
Sometimes we just won’t get
What we just aren’t meant to have

Yet something in your eyes
Changes when you see his face…
I see the look you get
And how none could take his place

Something in your eyes
Shows how much you care for him
So I must hide this longing
And keep it deep within

Something in your eyes
Showed me from the very start
The path for me is blocked
That leads to your heart

So I'll stay hidden in his shadow
Trying hard to hide my sighs
Hoping one day I could be
Something in your eyes...

Copyright Â© holderofthestone ... [ 2005-05-15 13:57:38]
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Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:52:24 PM AEST
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*sigh*...Beautiful... Ty for sharin
May be hidden within the eyes
for protection of the heart..
Wishing you luck..
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:33:00 PM AEST
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It's beautiful. Makes me want to be something in somebody eyes with that one person again. She's lucky to have somebody like you by her side. Beautifully written. I enjoy reading everything that you write.

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:45:49 PM AEST
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The EYES have it!! Wonderful write.. Well written..
Jenni

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by RejectionOfConformity on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 06:30:20 PM AEST
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Amazing poem, bravo. The entire poem made me think about how lucky I am.

Good Luck
-Zak

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 11:55:43 PM AEST
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This is very well written and it touched my heart. Beautiful

Leia

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 08:35:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful, holder. Heartbreakingly so. I don't know if this will make any sense... but this comes in a quiet voice and it is simply more potent because of that.

*sigh* ... yeh.

~Snemmy~

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 12:59:33 AM AEST
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it doesn't matter if she sees you, you'll always be something in my eyes. good write.

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 02:01:31 AM AEST
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wow, beautiful!

Re: Something in your eyes... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful! I also can so relate to it...especially to this:

Hoping one day I could be
Something in your eyes...

I completely understand.

Thank you for pointing this one out to me and I am sorry I missed it the first time around.

Tim

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