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Array ( [sid] => 94416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Glints [time] => 2005-05-15 03:23:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Aimlessly
Drawing aim
On whatever
Becomes game

Game is everything
And nothing
In a breath
The wrold is your oyster

Rotten raw food
Smacking away taste
Grimmacing openly
Choking on dabs

Searching for something
Grabbing at anything
Read in a book
That all is not lost

Sightless paths
Light footfalls
Impressions in snow
Are empty traces

Scents of the hounds
Hounds following scents
Trapped in the running
Ignoring the glints

Glints in the rabble
Broken glass in the dirt
Started out useful
Now instruments of hurt
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Glints

Contributed by xnoybis on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 03:23:41 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Aimlessly
Drawing aim
On whatever
Becomes game

Game is everything
And nothing
In a breath
The wrold is your oyster

Rotten raw food
Smacking away taste
Grimmacing openly
Choking on dabs

Searching for something
Grabbing at anything
Read in a book
That all is not lost

Sightless paths
Light footfalls
Impressions in snow
Are empty traces

Scents of the hounds
Hounds following scents
Trapped in the running
Ignoring the glints

Glints in the rabble
Broken glass in the dirt
Started out useful
Now instruments of hurt




Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2005-05-15 03:23:41]
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Re: Glints (User Rating: 1 )
by pleasantchap on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:41:31 AM AEST
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I especially liked the part about grabbing ideas from books and the opening lines,well done.


Re: Glints (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:03:30 AM AEST
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You have a unique spin going on here. I enjoyed this piece, especially the way you summed it up at the end. I would've liked to have seen this develop a bit more though, in terms of some of the ideas expressed...Maybe expanded here and there. Nicely done either way...Keep it up!



Scorp.




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