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Eyes my friend,
You’re not really ready
For this to all end

I wish I knew how to
Take away your pain
But all that I try
Seems to end up in vain

You tell everyone how you’re ok
But I can tell its all lies
The pains of your heart and soul
Show threw your eyes

You've both made mistakes
And said things untrue
I'm not sure if it’s too late
But you most follow your heart threw

Something that also needs to be done
Is make sure no matter what
That the kids know that
They are loved a lot

Whether you stay together
Or end up apart
Hopefully at least
A friendship will start

I pray each and every day that
The two of you will find your ways
I do the best a friend can do
And stand be beside you in up coming days
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Separation

Contributed by somedaylove on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:17:57 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I see it in your
Eyes my friend,
You’re not really ready
For this to all end

I wish I knew how to
Take away your pain
But all that I try
Seems to end up in vain

You tell everyone how you’re ok
But I can tell its all lies
The pains of your heart and soul
Show threw your eyes

You've both made mistakes
And said things untrue
I'm not sure if it’s too late
But you most follow your heart threw

Something that also needs to be done
Is make sure no matter what
That the kids know that
They are loved a lot

Whether you stay together
Or end up apart
Hopefully at least
A friendship will start

I pray each and every day that
The two of you will find your ways
I do the best a friend can do
And stand be beside you in up coming days

Copyright Â© somedaylove ... [ 2005-05-14 19:17:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Separation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 05:18:32 PM AEST
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That is so sweet for you to write about to your friend. Hope that your friend knows how lucky he is to have somebody who can help through the rough times. Hopefully all works out well for your friend. Good write and I don't think i could have said it better.

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