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Array ( [sid] => 94364 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => love me forever [time] => 2005-05-14 18:07:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => what is this pain i feel inside,
amongst these feelings that i hide?
where does it come from?
why does it make
all of my insides shiver and quake?

what is this love i feel for you
deep within my soul so dark and blue?
why does it make me hurt so much?
why is there nothing tangible,
something i cant touch?

something i can rip apart and tear out
something i could destroy for good
cause i want to and i would if i could

cause it hurts too much to love you now
i wish ive never known
the joy that you have given to me
i wish i had just been on my own

cause then i wouldnt be in so much pain
i wouldnt be so hurt
i wouldnt want to slash my veins
and die out in the dirt

what is this pain i feel inside?
its my love for you, my dear.
but no longer can it stay inside
my broken heart, i fear

its time for me to let it out
and im sorry, but this time
i will not be left here afterwards
to write you anymore rhymes

im sorry baby, but its just too hard
for me to cary on
so love me now, love me forever,
cause tomorrow ill be gone.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
love me forever

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



what is this pain i feel inside,
amongst these feelings that i hide?
where does it come from?
why does it make
all of my insides shiver and quake?

what is this love i feel for you
deep within my soul so dark and blue?
why does it make me hurt so much?
why is there nothing tangible,
something i cant touch?

something i can rip apart and tear out
something i could destroy for good
cause i want to and i would if i could

cause it hurts too much to love you now
i wish ive never known
the joy that you have given to me
i wish i had just been on my own

cause then i wouldnt be in so much pain
i wouldnt be so hurt
i wouldnt want to slash my veins
and die out in the dirt

what is this pain i feel inside?
its my love for you, my dear.
but no longer can it stay inside
my broken heart, i fear

its time for me to let it out
and im sorry, but this time
i will not be left here afterwards
to write you anymore rhymes

im sorry baby, but its just too hard
for me to cary on
so love me now, love me forever,
cause tomorrow ill be gone.





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Re: love me forever (User Rating: 1 )
by twisted_dreams on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:10:18 PM AEST
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you know i used to think like that.. and all i wanted to do was kill my self.. but ppl on this site talked to me and told me that i had something to live for so i just want you to know are who you are and you too have somethin to live for.. if you even need anything just write and i will write back.. anyways great write!


Re: love me forever (User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:39:17 PM AEST
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wow! i love it! great rite! i can feel the emotion...i've gone threw it...it'll get bettr!


Re: love me forever (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:13:13 PM AEST
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Awww...i loved ur poem, this was very good u really have deep feelings 4 this person and u explain ur love very well!! keep writing ~~Chrissy


Re: love me forever (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:13:43 PM AEST
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Awww...i loved ur poem, this was very good u really have deep feelings 4 this person and u explain ur love very well!! keep writing ~~Chrissy


Re: love me forever (User Rating: 1 )
by BaByBaNaNa on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 12:40:42 AM AEST
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OH MY GOD! your poem is absolutely what's going on in my head! You are INTELLIGENT! you truly spoke your words, and yuo spoke them well! EXCELLENT write!




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