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Array ( [sid] => 9436 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Forgotten Life [time] => 2002-12-30 01:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With the pen in my right hand
I write out my story
I write out my feelings
Black against the white
Flowing seemlessly
I say what I need to say
Only it's written down
So topsy turvey
My life's so boring
I can't remember anything
It says the same stuff
Only repeated
Over and over again
It's later now and I'm still thinking
A block has come over me
Is that my whole life?
To be forgotten
When I try and think about it?
I regret it ; the wondering worship
Of the thoughts that're in my head
There's no point in remembering
The nothing that I've done
I've done nothing to complete the end
I'm lost and forgotten
Battered and confused
I'm hung out like a plastic bag
Beaten and abused
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 39 [informant] => InexactExactness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Forgotten Life

Contributed by InexactExactness on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

With the pen in my right hand
I write out my story
I write out my feelings
Black against the white
Flowing seemlessly
I say what I need to say
Only it's written down
So topsy turvey
My life's so boring
I can't remember anything
It says the same stuff
Only repeated
Over and over again
It's later now and I'm still thinking
A block has come over me
Is that my whole life?
To be forgotten
When I try and think about it?
I regret it ; the wondering worship
Of the thoughts that're in my head
There's no point in remembering
The nothing that I've done
I've done nothing to complete the end
I'm lost and forgotten
Battered and confused
I'm hung out like a plastic bag
Beaten and abused

Copyright © InexactExactness ... [ 2002-12-30 01:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Forgotten Life (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 01:22:25 AM AEST
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Felt the same the other day,Thats when I wrote.... Writers Block! Great peice here!
Christina

Re: Forgotten Life (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 05:19:28 AM AEST
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We all gotta do something about this hey. Ummm how do we work the point system?? And is 1 the best or is 5 the best? :S

Re: Forgotten Life (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:13:23 PM AEST
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and im still in tears from the last poem as i read this one which calms me but then all together at the end hung out like a plastic bag beaten and abused brought the tears back...my friend have you ever thought about going a bit farther with your poetry??? Your poetry im serious moves me very deeply...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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