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Will Love Prevail...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:30:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tormented with the ailing memories
Of past liasions and encumbered hate
My ex destroyed every part of me
Leaving me in a frail dead like state
Tarnished ruins remain
Embering in my heart
Excruciating pain
Adamant and so stark
I never knew that my ex could
Break me to the point
Sever my fragile heart
At each and every joint
Sitting back in the shadows
Like a queen who's been dethroned
With dormant love that lays buried
Forever fervent and forlorned
The sands of time wither
As they slowly slip through the hour glass
I weakly pray on bended knees
As the tears on my cheeks surpass
I can no longer endure this pain
A marred future lays ahead
Distorted dreams and visions
I'd better off being dead
As the rains came and went
I thought 'twas my foreseen destiny
To remain forever lonely and unloved
This heart's beauty a useless amenity
The long awaited anticipation
Of a new love to venture my way
Came as the seasons changed
Unexpected 'twas the day
A new love came a drifting
He made his love avail
I wearily chanced to partake
As I wonder will love prevail?
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mina-1
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2005-05-14 16:30:23]
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by shelby on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:07:22 PM AEST
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oh Mina this was almost haunting to me been there done that and yes love will prevail and it will be love as its meant to be Im hoping that you find that and it blossoms fragrant and wild
beautiful emotional write your heart shows
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:55:39 PM AEST
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Of course true love will prevail,cause it's the kind of love to take you to heaven & keep you far from hell! In my heart each beat doesn't fade,instead it beats harder for a true love to stay!! love can be scared,or love can be brave, it can be hoping for a prayer,or find the answer & be forever saved!!! Beautiful poem,like that who wrote it!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:36:06 PM AEST
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I think you just told the story of the last year of my life! Been there, lived through it, and just when I thought I would always be alone, there he was. Time only will tell what will transpire. But it proved to me that there is always love somewhere and we have to chance it or live our lives desolate and lonely. Wishing you strength and forever love.
Rita |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:06:39 PM AEST
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love always does.
I love how this poem blossoms in the end..
speaking of an "unexpected day"
and a "new love"
so there is hope after all...
very cool..
great write
M.O.H. |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by greeneyes on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:32:08 PM AEST
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The answer is YES. It may not be as soon as you would like but it will happen, enjoyed reading this.
Nancy |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:14:10 PM AEST
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| lovely write ,,love is like a carousel it always comes around again,,,I likee |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:20:21 PM AEST
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A ture poetic love story u r always perfect in your portrayl of this emotion, beautifuly crafted
a true work of art . . . |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:22:15 PM AEST
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i thought u deserved a second comment u write so lovely and yet convey such innocent
emotions in your work . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:12:08 PM AEST
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Sue,
Great write, it is both beautiful and well written, very expressive!!! It gives me hope.
your friend,
Leia |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:12:36 PM AEST
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This is a truely awesome write Mina...captivating from the forst line to the last...Great job and good luck
~Clark |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by somedaylove on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 09:31:56 AM AEST
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| very nice write............Best wishes with your new love may it wash away all the memories of the bad one............Great write keep it up |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:16:47 PM AEST
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Wow Sue what a sad and powerful write with a happy ending. I hope love does prevail for you my friend you are a very loving soul and you only deserve the best. As for the ex he will have to live with what he lost. He lost one of the best and he lost love and I pray forever he lives knowing this. You are a great friend and its great to see you get these emotions out. I have my own problems and you have helped me so much by being their for me to talk to. I’m always here if you need anything. Take care Sue and know you are loved by many. Your good friend Steve |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 10:54:06 PM AEST
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magnificent poem sue, absolutely beautifully outstanding:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:41:44 PM AEST
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Hoping that love prevails for you once more, Sue...
Very sad but hopeful write..
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:49:37 AM AEST
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Superb poem Sue. I wish you every happiness. And through the darkness came light.
Brill
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Will Love Prevail...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:07:21 PM AEST
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| mmm... very nice. I've been in this dead state once upon a long time ago. Poignant write - well done! J. |
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