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Deprresion of love
Contributed by
evildude
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Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Roses are red and violets are blue
Why do you do the things you do
I was caught in youre web, i let out a cry
Why you crawl in a hole and die
You were so mean
and i was so lean
but that didn't change a thing
But all i could do is sing sing sing...
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2005-05-14 14:57:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deprresion of love
(User Rating: 1 ) by hollyc-state on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:18:14 PM AEST (User
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Your poem is short and yet it holds a lot of meaning and emotion. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Deprresion of love
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:20:49 PM AEST (User
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What sad write. It's emotionally packed with your pain and anger.
I thought it was great and you did really well in this
Welcome to YPDC.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: Deprresion of love
(User Rating: 1 ) by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:08:16 PM AEST (User
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short but sweet. well, not sweet, but it was a good write. sad and depressing. hope it all works out for you! keep up the good work.
~sprints |
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