Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  01-November 10:27:30 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
 Reference
· Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

A Love So Deep

Contributed by Jaycee on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:02:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Woke up this morning
with her on my mind
Oh I am fixated
on this woman so kind

She is so unavailable
we must be platonic
Given how I yearn for her
this thinking's moronic

I've forgotten to eat
my thirst I don't slake
of her I do dream
both asleep and awake

My breathing goes ragged
my body's on fire
She's all that I want
Consumed by desire

She's not mine to want
She's not mine to keep
But that cannot extinguish
these feeelings so deep

The chemistry's been there
oh, right from the start
I fear she's imprinted
her name on my heart

How I yearn to hold her
and kiss her so much
Our fingers lightly brushing
a feather soft touch

I was dead before I met her
a shell of a man
I can never go back
before this began

and held in my arms
is where she wants to be
Know this to be true
but it just cannot be

My honor is my life
so I must continue to cry
Desire just one kiss
then so ready to die





Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-05-14 13:02:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:29:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I'd say you did real fine, Jaycee.... and doing just great I must add. Thank you my friend...
I don't think there's any need to cry tho....lol..
Hugs
Crazy Jenni


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:50:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Well, I think you did splendid. Maybe love and romance is your venue to show off your talent. Splendid piece.

Rita


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by hollyc-state on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 03:32:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Your first poem like that huh??? I would not have guessed. It was touching, yet soft and very well written. Thanks for sharing. : )


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:11:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
a pleasure to read light and airy flowing with romance I enjoy someone who shows me their heart in their words
Michelle


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:02:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very nicely done. Those kinds of feelings can be dangerous. But that's probably what draws us to them in the first place.
Keep up the great writing!

Take care
Stellar


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:27:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
ya found ur calling..
awesome flow,
a tragedy in romance...

I say go after her anyway you can!!


M.O.H.


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 11:18:31 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Jaycee,

Very romantic and beautifully written!!

Leia


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:27:19 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
thats a great poem... i rilly like it. so much passion and emotion in it, like really heart felt. its a beautiful piece, i hope u can werk things out,
luv n hugs,
jennie*


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by CloakedMystery on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:04:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
AWWWW!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!! although it needs a little work its stilll really good! i could never write like you or any of the other ppl on ypdc....

LaterZ!


Re: A Love So Deep (User Rating: 1 )
by CloakedMystery on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:05:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
AWWWW!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!! although it needs a little work its stilll really good! i could never write like you or any of the other ppl on ypdc....

LaterZ!




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com