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with pure white softened wings?
Watched her dance among the clouds
or heard the song she sings?

Her words will sing of longing,
her melody will sigh,
and if you stay in silence,
you'll hear the angel's cry,

Her tears will fall like raindrops,
So stop a little while,
and turn your head towards the stars
to make the angel smile

For then she'll know you're listening,
and have no cause to fear,
How can her song be beautiful?
If no one cares to hear?

This is why the sea is full
of sad forgotten screams,
of all the lonely angels
with broken hearts and dreams

So if you hear an angel's song,
rain down from up above,
Be sure to listen carefully,
Don't let her waste her love.
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An Angel's Heart

Contributed by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:24:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Have you seen the Angel,
with pure white softened wings?
Watched her dance among the clouds
or heard the song she sings?

Her words will sing of longing,
her melody will sigh,
and if you stay in silence,
you'll hear the angel's cry,

Her tears will fall like raindrops,
So stop a little while,
and turn your head towards the stars
to make the angel smile

For then she'll know you're listening,
and have no cause to fear,
How can her song be beautiful?
If no one cares to hear?

This is why the sea is full
of sad forgotten screams,
of all the lonely angels
with broken hearts and dreams

So if you hear an angel's song,
rain down from up above,
Be sure to listen carefully,
Don't let her waste her love.

Copyright © Terry_Stephen_Driscoll ... [ 2005-05-14 07:24:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:31:07 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, a lovely write.

"How can her song be beautiful?
If no one cares to hear?"

I love that, and some of the images in this are really good.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 08:26:58 AM AEST
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This is a splendid piece of work. Your imagery is beautiful and structure is very nice. I enjoyed reading this .

Rita

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:46:14 AM AEST
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Beautiful write. Never waste your angels love and alway listen to her..............keep up the great work

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:49:59 AM AEST
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As a collector of Angel things I loved this! This truly made my heart sing! Christina

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_descent on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:17:51 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful and melancholic, and the rhyme scheme is perfect. thank you for sharing this

Jen x

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 12:53:08 AM AEST
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Absolutely stunning. It has that perfection touch to it... :)

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 07:56:07 AM AEST
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Too often we pass the angels by. May we heed your words.
I love the stanza about the sea, for it has always captivated me. If angels weeping are the ocean's cries, then now I know why they capture me so. Thank you for a great poem.
Take care.
David

Re: An Angel's Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Tuesday, 26th February 2008 @ 11:50:15 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful write, which all I read so far is super..
God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry

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