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Array ( [sid] => 94280 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The light [time] => 2005-05-13 14:55:14 [hometext] => Please give me a comment! [bodytext] => So
It happened again
I looked into the light
The so beautiful everlasting light
It touched my eyes so softly like silk

I want it to keep on touching me
I want it to keep on caressing me
I want it to keep on smiling at me

I want it
I need it
I adore it

But I Can’t

It’s time
Time to turn around
Around where the dark shines
Shines with sorrow and despair

I will never ever see that light
Again
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The light

Contributed by Djarven on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:55:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

So
It happened again
I looked into the light
The so beautiful everlasting light
It touched my eyes so softly like silk

I want it to keep on touching me
I want it to keep on caressing me
I want it to keep on smiling at me

I want it
I need it
I adore it

But I Can’t

It’s time
Time to turn around
Around where the dark shines
Shines with sorrow and despair

I will never ever see that light
Again

Copyright Â© Djarven ... [ 2005-05-13 14:55:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The light (User Rating: 1 )
by Shishke_Bob on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:11:24 PM AEST
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If you know what the light feels like then why do you leave? this was a dark poem not because of the word used but because of its over all tone, and that is a real talent to be able to do that, I do hope that you are doing better now, if not then just know that we are always here if you need to talk. Be well

Re: The light (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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Yes, my friend, one day when the universe is ready for you, you will see that light again. You will bask in it. Never fear you are alone or forgotten. We all eventually go to that light. Sins were forgive before the were ever committed. I am not religious but I am spiritual. I do believe in a higher power than myself and that our ancestral spirits watch over us and take us in when we die. Until then, lt the sunshine into your heart and feel assured you will eventually come into that light and be reunited with ancestors. I send you spiritual blessings. Rita (aka Dove)

Re: The light (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:37:10 PM AEST
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i could really relate to this poem! Fantastic it was!
Feels like i've just had to turn away from my light too...and face darkness...coz it couldn't be mine to keep either.
great write!! keep it up! :)

Ps, even in dark times...there is always hope. (as hard as that is to beleive sometimes)

Re: The light (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:20:18 PM AEST
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heres a stanza for you

"do you love the light?
but live in dark?
do you feel the beauty?
but also it's bite?"

needing light, loveing it, something ot find

kc

Re: The light (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 10:43:47 PM AEST
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There is a meditation I have done that takes you to a light...It is a white light as well and in it you see the magnificence of who you are and what you are capable of and yes it is intoxicatingly beautiful and you will weep with the joy and wisdom of who you are.....you and the universe are always one...working together...but you come back and you use that wisdom of who you are to your highest power to have your human experience.Peace and joy to you always.

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