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Array ( [sid] => 94271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye Baby [time] => 2005-05-13 11:37:16 [hometext] => This is very personal... [bodytext] => Goodbye little stranger
I'm sorry we never met
Do you have your daddy's eyes?
You're just like him I bet

Goodbye little stranger
Your time just isn't now
Someday you will do great things
Perhaps I'll even know how

Goodbye little stranger
The deed has now been done
You are just a memory
You were my very first one

Goodbye little stranger
Though I never knew your face
Perhaps you will grow precious wings
As an angel under grace [comments] => 8 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Spell_Weaver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Goodbye Baby

Contributed by Spell_Weaver on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Goodbye little stranger
I'm sorry we never met
Do you have your daddy's eyes?
You're just like him I bet

Goodbye little stranger
Your time just isn't now
Someday you will do great things
Perhaps I'll even know how

Goodbye little stranger
The deed has now been done
You are just a memory
You were my very first one

Goodbye little stranger
Though I never knew your face
Perhaps you will grow precious wings
As an angel under grace

Copyright © Spell_Weaver ... [ 2005-05-13 11:37:16]
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Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:41:21 AM AEST
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I share in your grief and pain as I have lost three to the wings of angels myself. You have my deepest condolences. This poem is sad and touches the heart...very personal indeed.
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:05:26 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem ..

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:06:08 PM AEST
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Truly, truly sad....It's been some time since i've read a poem of this much emotional impact. "Goodbye little stranger", how powerful. The loss i sense in it is overwhelming! I hope that all goes well for you and stay strong. Thank you so very much for this incredible piece.

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:19:12 PM AEST
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there are just no words to express how this poem moves me heart, mind and soul... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Infernality on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:15:22 PM AEST
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This poem is so sad, Im sorry such a thing has happened. I share your grief in this beautiful poem...

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:36:37 PM AEST
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this was a beautiful poem....keep writing i thought it was amazing especially in the beginning where yew put do you have your daddys eyes? Your just like him i bet. its so cute keep writing ~~chrissy

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:38:24 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your pain and suffering, but having the courage to post this shows that you are heeling, many thanks to Him for that, I know what its like to lose someone before you got to know them and it is very hard to get over (personaly I still havent...) this poem did bring tears to my eyes and made my heart sink for you, just know that it was for the best ( I know that it sounds stuped but trust me it is) yes it will hurt but this pain will pass and you will be a better person for it. I will pray for you. Be well.

Re: Goodbye Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Noelia on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:26:52 PM AEST
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Your poem is really sad, but good too.

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