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Array ( [sid] => 94268 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Life to Death Transistion. The Last Step [time] => 2005-05-13 10:37:50 [hometext] => Part three in a Series of four. This is my Life to Death Transistion. Please also read Part one The Begining and Part two The Reason. Comment if you wish. I hope you like part 3 of 4. [bodytext] => ----------_________--------------------

I know your out there laughing
Its time for me to disapear
I know your heart is making mine empty
The unhappy ending is coming near

I could never tell you
The things you want to hear
What Im about to go through
Will force me through my fear

These borken wings have a hold tonight
No one can see them, no one can see me
When darkness fell on my eyes lastnight
I never expected to feel the fear I could not see

Everytime I bite my lip
I take yet another sip of the lies
I acted like your the prize
I can no longer swallow my pride

If I could just close my eyes
I could easly pull the trigger
Then I can finally see what I am made of
When it ends, will this death finally be done?

I cant change it
I can no longer heal myself
Disjointed aloneness
The screech of agony against hard steel

The scream
the coveted startlement
surprising the starkness of the blankness
it reverberates

The air is empty
The hollowness screams of insanities and
sings of the chaos and harmonies
deafen all else

Calm smooth roughness snow and ice
the curve of flame
the lick of steam born of both
water is mindless and lonely
though it's surrounded by life

Same here but I can think about all of it
Help
Help me clense myself
Help me stop the painful terror

Help me set myself free
I no longer want these shattered memories
There are no words left here
None that can ever make these sorrows disapear

I think I am chasing dreams that dont exsist
But Ive try so hard to find something better then this
Running from the hate, running from all I see
Fear my pain, stare into the eyes of me, end this for me.

I die a little more each day
This forced separation
Addiction
Regression

Suspended animation
My life to death Transistion!
This is the last step towards the Degradation!
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My Life to Death Transistion. The Last Step

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:37:50 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



----------_________--------------------

I know your out there laughing
Its time for me to disapear
I know your heart is making mine empty
The unhappy ending is coming near

I could never tell you
The things you want to hear
What Im about to go through
Will force me through my fear

These borken wings have a hold tonight
No one can see them, no one can see me
When darkness fell on my eyes lastnight
I never expected to feel the fear I could not see

Everytime I bite my lip
I take yet another sip of the lies
I acted like your the prize
I can no longer swallow my pride

If I could just close my eyes
I could easly pull the trigger
Then I can finally see what I am made of
When it ends, will this death finally be done?

I cant change it
I can no longer heal myself
Disjointed aloneness
The screech of agony against hard steel

The scream
the coveted startlement
surprising the starkness of the blankness
it reverberates

The air is empty
The hollowness screams of insanities and
sings of the chaos and harmonies
deafen all else

Calm smooth roughness snow and ice
the curve of flame
the lick of steam born of both
water is mindless and lonely
though it's surrounded by life

Same here but I can think about all of it
Help
Help me clense myself
Help me stop the painful terror

Help me set myself free
I no longer want these shattered memories
There are no words left here
None that can ever make these sorrows disapear

I think I am chasing dreams that dont exsist
But Ive try so hard to find something better then this
Running from the hate, running from all I see
Fear my pain, stare into the eyes of me, end this for me.

I die a little more each day
This forced separation
Addiction
Regression

Suspended animation
My life to death Transistion!
This is the last step towards the Degradation!




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Re: My Life to Death Transistion. The Last Step (User Rating: 1 )
by Columbus on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:09:24 AM AEST
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i read all three poems. they are very well written. i know i don't know you and you don't know me so this willl sound wierd, but i hope you're ok. Life really does keep going after something really bad happens, or even after a series of bad things happen. Life will be what you make it, and at first it will be hard to make it anything good....but if you break out of your shell just a little, hang with some people whom actually care...they'll help you through anything. My friends help me out a lot....i never had good friends before. i've learned that leason recently....i don't know whats going on in your life, but i honestly hope things go good for you. You're a great poet.




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