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Leaving a cool feeling
On the skin a tingle
Sending the senses reeling

Hearts touched for a moment
A fleeting stir
Then like a phantom lost
In a lifetimes whirl

Friendships formed
Then quickly gone
Echoes left behind
Wondering what went wrong

Time and time again
We take the chance
As we touch soul’s
In life’s magical dance

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Life's Magical Dance

Contributed by NoSaint on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:09:19 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Breezes come and they go
Leaving a cool feeling
On the skin a tingle
Sending the senses reeling

Hearts touched for a moment
A fleeting stir
Then like a phantom lost
In a lifetimes whirl

Friendships formed
Then quickly gone
Echoes left behind
Wondering what went wrong

Time and time again
We take the chance
As we touch soul’s
In life’s magical dance

Copyright Â© NoSaint ... [ 2005-05-13 10:09:19]
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Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by crap_snapper on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:50:05 AM AEST
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i like this poem, although i don't really agree with what it's saying. Friends do come and go but that’s just as a result of people changing with time. It shouldn't be a negative thing, they are just points in time making you who you are at that particular point. Every day i die and am reborn as someone else and people drift into my life and people drift out of it. Just be happy for the friends you have and the friends you have had. If however it means lovers and not just friendships then yes, that can hurt.

Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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this is absolutely beautiful shari, and just as i was reading it came a cool breeze from the window so it togeher gave a warm smile to me:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:17:49 PM AEST
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beautiful Shari and so very right
Michelle

Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:54:22 PM AEST
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My dear Shari,
It's just Oh So Nice to read your very beautiful word again. Life truly is a magical dance, my friend. I got goose bumps as I read this lovely piece of yours. We dance a different dance each day and along the way just think of all the souls we touch!
This was so true, and as always, Shari, few words and simplicity are always the best. Has the most impact....
Wunderful WunderfulWunderful!!!
Warm Love
consue
And thank you for letting me know Shari,
for sharing is so generous!

Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:53:25 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Shari... Life is about taking chances....win or lose.... we gotta do it...what ever the outcome...
Hugs,
Jenni

Re: Life's Magical Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 12:13:06 AM AEST
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Lovely write..so true you are..venkat

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