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Pain from Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:14:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Do my words run deep and touch your soul
Do you feel these words from a heart turned cold
With ice it broke from the words you spoke
You sad you loved me was our love a joke
Do you want me to stay or you want me to go
You want my body but do you want my soul
For I feel all you have is a lust for me
and it rips me apart because your all I need
My eyes turn red and fill with pain
As I began to cry and I go insane
Your all I dreamed and your all I need
So why do you hurt me and make me bleed
Have you ever felt the way I feel girl
You make me cut my wrists to know its real
As I feel the pain run down my hands
Do you feel and see what you’ve done to this man
Now you’ve hurt me so much that I must go
You can have your life and I’ll have my own
For theirs more to life then you and me
So I’m going to leave and set myself free
Copyright ©
sride686
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2005-05-13 05:14:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by mylady on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:16:06 AM AEST (User
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It 's nice like the part :You want my body but do you want my soul ..Make you wonder if you
want the hole person or just body or the soul.
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by mina-1 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 07:49:07 AM AEST (User
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Steve this is a sad and heart breaking write. You've written exactly how I feel at the moment. An outstanding remarkable and deeply expressed poem. Alot of emotion in this one and the pain is just excruciating.
U had a writers block, my friend, I didn't even notice. Ur writing is so unique. You're a talented poet who has the incredible ability to be able to express himself well through his work. Keep up the brillant work. Your poetry always touches my heart my dear friend.
*hugs*
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:28:59 AM AEST (User
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Love can be the greatest con artist of all, and as they say, never try and con a con artist, but men and women see love differently so with odds like that, you have a better chance on a
lame horse at the track . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by blue_angel on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:26:26 AM AEST (User
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wow steve, i can really relate to this. i have so recently felt this way as well toward someone, but i found something better, someone who really did love me and things are going great rite now. i hope that things work out for you, i know how much you have to deal with rite now.
luv n hugs n lotsa hope,
jennie* |
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by In_a_while on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:34:55 PM AEST (User
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Wow! i really liked this one. The loss and hurt were like fireworks in the sky! My hat goes off to this strong, strong poem. I'd like to hear more for sure. dw |
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:34:31 PM AEST (User
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Oh Steve this is really good! Great emotions involved and I hope you start feeling better soon. Take care
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:08:59 AM AEST (User
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How sad very sad.emotional write.
great job. |
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Re: Pain from Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by spazz911 on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:12:44 PM AEST (User
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i love this poem, realatable, but tragic in that since, i know how both sides feel for I've been on both, best of luck
kc |
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