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[aid] => mick
[title] => Do you bleed?
[time] => 2005-05-13 00:41:25
[hometext] => sorry that this is so long, I dont know where it came from just started writing it and this came out, enjoy. I need help with my writing, please comment.
[bodytext] => Do you bleed? Blood. Crimson. Red. Whatever you call it! This pain will keep me well fed So much so that I won't quit But that’s just me What about you Is this what you would like to be Could this be what you do? The scars that will appear You will have to hide If they find out, will they fear? Of course they will not abide How much would you bleed? How deep would you slice? How much pain would you need? How many times would you dice? What you use will be a choice It will make you, you And it will also make your voice As well as help you when you are through This will be the definitive truth It will tell you what you are If it hurts bite your lip with your tooth But be careful not to let it go too far Don’t give in to hate Of others or you Just stay calm and wait Sorrow to others you might do How much could you bleed? How deep could you slice? How much pain could you need? How many times could you dice? When you make the decision That will be the final step It will send you in to a collision And you will know that on you this crept So don’t be surprised then This was a long time coming Even so this is who you would have been So this in your mind will be humming It will be something quanta But it will be weird Sometimes you will faint And it will be something that you feared How much should you bleed? How deep should you slice? How much pain should you need? How many times should you dice? Now to the point I don’t condone this But if you find this to be your joint Then I will condone with a kiss Who am I to tell you no I am just a man with a flaw Now on your way you must go And the crows will sing you along with their caw Then with that you did leave And I still wonder if you did To my advice cleave When a farewell to you I did bid How much will you bleed? How deep will you slice? How much pain will you need? How many times will you dice? Now here you lay With this your life fading Only pain in your way And only the wound will be parading Time did pass and blood did flow You went numb and got cold It seemed too much you had to go Against this is something to you I told Why did this occur? I told you to be warned Is death what you prefer? Now your others will be forlorn How much did you bleed? How deep did you slice? How much pain did you need? How many times did you dice? I will not linger here So away I will go If I stay will cause fear And I try to leave but no Away from here I cant walk As hard as I try I can’t leave I try to speak but cannot talk Slowly my heart starts to grieve I now know why I felt for him And taught him this way to be For it was my life that was a sin And I know now that he is me How much could I bleed? How deep should I slice? How much pain will I need? How many times did I dice? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 59 [informant] => heartless_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
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