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Array ( [sid] => 94213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Would You... [time] => 2005-05-12 20:13:21 [hometext] => My second poem that doesn't rhyme... comments PLEASE!!! [bodytext] => If she was to fall,
Sprawled out,
On her bed,
With her blood shot eyes
Boring holes in the ceiling
And her wrists bleeding
With her heart
Torn to pieces,
Cheaply repaired
With the duct tape of liquor,
Would you stop
To think
Of what may have
Driven her to this fate?
If she was to die
Tomorrow,
Butchered and beaten,
Broken and alone,
Left to waste away forever
On the streets of loneliness,
With her final thoughts
Inevitably drifting
To the one sole being
Who was the reason
For her living,
Would you shed tears
In her memory
Or in the memory of
The pathetic assets
Which have come
To govern your life?
Would you mourn
The cost of her arrangements
Or your burden of a child?
Would you notice
Her wrists
And the harsh abrasion
That has appeared?
Would you care
That your precious disaster
Suffered more
Because of you
Then her own
Petty catastrophes?
Would you even notice
On that fateful night,
The blood
Seeping into her sheets
Or her tear-stained bed,
Which had evolved
Into her second home,
Or would you
Assert your power
Once again
And remind her
How useless, worthless
And blatantly lazy she is
By telling her
To set the god damn table,
When she is slowly drifting
Into her beloved oblivion? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => CBlake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Would You...

Contributed by CBlake on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:13:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

If she was to fall,
Sprawled out,
On her bed,
With her blood shot eyes
Boring holes in the ceiling
And her wrists bleeding
With her heart
Torn to pieces,
Cheaply repaired
With the duct tape of liquor,
Would you stop
To think
Of what may have
Driven her to this fate?
If she was to die
Tomorrow,
Butchered and beaten,
Broken and alone,
Left to waste away forever
On the streets of loneliness,
With her final thoughts
Inevitably drifting
To the one sole being
Who was the reason
For her living,
Would you shed tears
In her memory
Or in the memory of
The pathetic assets
Which have come
To govern your life?
Would you mourn
The cost of her arrangements
Or your burden of a child?
Would you notice
Her wrists
And the harsh abrasion
That has appeared?
Would you care
That your precious disaster
Suffered more
Because of you
Then her own
Petty catastrophes?
Would you even notice
On that fateful night,
The blood
Seeping into her sheets
Or her tear-stained bed,
Which had evolved
Into her second home,
Or would you
Assert your power
Once again
And remind her
How useless, worthless
And blatantly lazy she is
By telling her
To set the god damn table,
When she is slowly drifting
Into her beloved oblivion?

Copyright © CBlake ... [ 2005-05-12 20:13:21]
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Re: Would You... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:32:25 PM AEST
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I shivered reading this so dark and heartbreaking nicely written but the pain here noone should endure

hugs
Michelle

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