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And skin that peels
A life in need
But has lost all feel

Hands that shake
And eyes that cry
Exhale without intake
Only wishing to die

Wounds that scar
And bones that break
A soul too marred
To show his face

Only he knows the truth
And only he ever will
. . .
The blade goes too far through
A gash too deep to seal

Another rebirth of tragedy
As his problems
Are now healed
. . .
But nobody cared
For they did'nt even noticed
He was'nt there
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Rebirth Of Tragedy

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:10:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Veins that bleed
And skin that peels
A life in need
But has lost all feel

Hands that shake
And eyes that cry
Exhale without intake
Only wishing to die

Wounds that scar
And bones that break
A soul too marred
To show his face

Only he knows the truth
And only he ever will
. . .
The blade goes too far through
A gash too deep to seal

Another rebirth of tragedy
As his problems
Are now healed
. . .
But nobody cared
For they did'nt even noticed
He was'nt there

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-05-12 20:10:40]
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Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:27:45 PM AEST
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I noticed that you WERE here...

man...
lots of fu%$#@! pain there...

gotta stop beatin yaself up...
such sadness...

awesome poem!
peace to you...

M.O.H.

Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:17:40 PM AEST
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if he wasnt noticed, he isnt missed. some people would want that...i still dont know what i want...well clark be comforted that this poem doesnt apply to you in any way, even though i dont think you had the intent of it being. strong ending of course. i liked your title, the other people that dont like it, they just dont have good taste. i must say that i liked the stages of this...if you notice the first line of each stanza just seems to make a story on their own, and flow perfectly. the truth of what...is my only question...

Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:30:43 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. Raw with emotion. Nearly brought me to tears. I loved it though.

~Alucia~

Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 12:34:26 PM AEST
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Full of loniness and pain, sometimes its just so darn hard to stand on our own...

Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:38:13 PM AEST
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Words that carry a powerful meaning. Well done, as you slowly but surely pulled the reader into a captivating read. Not only that, but it was given such a sensible ending that tied things up together so well. Although, the ending seems to be a tad bit cynical, and hopefully you're not the speaker here. The word "healed" was quite the selection, because it's not necessarily "healed" in a good way, but nevertheless it was. Long story short, great work here Clark.

Re: Rebirth Of Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:52:32 PM AEST
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This piece is awesome with it's emotional depth. Great job Clark! Descriptive wording that gives a good visual to your story. Well done.
I adore the title too btw...It sucked me right in : )

Scorp.

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