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I lose all sense and I don’t know what to do.

Weak is how I feel when I know your near
My heart melts when it’s your voice that I hear.

Temptation is hard to fight when it's you that is tempting
I try and I try, but I can’t keep resisting.

It’s like you have my love in the palm of your hand.
And I wish I had yours and that you were my man.

In the back of my mind I know this could never be true.
Even though all I want is to be next to you.

Now I put on a front and say you don’t mean a thing to me,
But people always tell me, “Denial is a bad thing.”

I never known someone who knew me so well,
Someone who knows when I’m lying or if it’s the truth that I tell.

Now we’re friend who are cool with each other,
But I still wonder if it’s better that being your lover.

Now I think having a friend is best for me,
But there still was a time when you made me weak.
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Weak

Contributed by PoeticFlower15 on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Weak is how I feel when I’m around you.
I lose all sense and I don’t know what to do.

Weak is how I feel when I know your near
My heart melts when it’s your voice that I hear.

Temptation is hard to fight when it's you that is tempting
I try and I try, but I can’t keep resisting.

It’s like you have my love in the palm of your hand.
And I wish I had yours and that you were my man.

In the back of my mind I know this could never be true.
Even though all I want is to be next to you.

Now I put on a front and say you don’t mean a thing to me,
But people always tell me, “Denial is a bad thing.”

I never known someone who knew me so well,
Someone who knows when I’m lying or if it’s the truth that I tell.

Now we’re friend who are cool with each other,
But I still wonder if it’s better that being your lover.

Now I think having a friend is best for me,
But there still was a time when you made me weak.

Copyright Â© PoeticFlower15 ... [ 2005-05-12 18:42:06]
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Re: Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th February 2006 @ 03:11:33 PM AEST
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you are stronger, not weaker. experience always makes one stronger

beautiful poem...i love it

-Bethani-

Re: Weak (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th June 2007 @ 12:35:25 PM AEST
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I know how you gfeel. I fell for another girl whom made me weak whenever I was around her and made me hot when she touched me. But Now I treasure her more as a friend now even though my feelings for her are still strong. Great Job!

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