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Array ( [sid] => 94194 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I won't tell [time] => 2005-05-12 18:29:57 [hometext] => I wrote this last night and i ask that you please comment..I need to here that I'm not the only one who feels this way... [bodytext] => I cry myself to sleep
each and every night
i want to take my life today
and make everything alright

everyone says
there are the hardest years to live
but you'll get through ut
with every step you give

i know in my heart
that it is not true
it is a bad time
and i won't make it through

my friends are going away
they said their becoming close
and i know there is no time for me
but thats just another dose

i dotn want to tell anyone
about the problems that i deal
i know they will just act fake
instead of acting real

people ask me what is wrong
i tell them I want to die
they just sit and look at me
and start asking why

soon they will see
that i wasnt joking around
i will soon be gone
lying in the ground.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => twisted_dreams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I won't tell

Contributed by twisted_dreams on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:29:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I cry myself to sleep
each and every night
i want to take my life today
and make everything alright

everyone says
there are the hardest years to live
but you'll get through ut
with every step you give

i know in my heart
that it is not true
it is a bad time
and i won't make it through

my friends are going away
they said their becoming close
and i know there is no time for me
but thats just another dose

i dotn want to tell anyone
about the problems that i deal
i know they will just act fake
instead of acting real

people ask me what is wrong
i tell them I want to die
they just sit and look at me
and start asking why

soon they will see
that i wasnt joking around
i will soon be gone
lying in the ground....

Copyright © twisted_dreams ... [ 2005-05-12 18:29:57]
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Re: I won't tell (User Rating: 1 )
by death_not_be_feared on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:39:32 PM AEST
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I know just how u feel i can totally relate.everyone just thinks u r messing around but no one really understands.Great write love to hear more

~Savannah

Re: I won't tell (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:42:40 AM AEST
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there are more people out there that know what you are going through then yoiu think, just that some of them arnt here and the others dont think that you are truly having a problem, but I for one do (I know that it sounds all preachy and "high and mighty" about me but it isnt.) I just wanted to say that yes there are going to be hard times in your life and yes they will pass but there will be more I a sorry for that but its something that we all have to go through, the friends that you tell this to that dont do anything dont know what to do, they are not sure if you are lieing or not so there are scared to do anything thinking that it might offend you. please dont take your life if for no one elas then for us if you need to talk we are always here for you. this was a very emotional poem made my heart feel for you and I do hope and I will pray that you feel better. do keep posting for us please. Be well

Re: I won't tell (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_for_eternity on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 07:03:01 PM AEST
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I just want you to know, I will always be here for you to talk to... I might understand more of what you say than you think I could, and I'll try to help you as much as I can!!! When you're having a hard time, don't be afraid to talk to me!

This poem was packed with emotion and well written... but I'm really sorry you feel like that.

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