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Tortured mind, a war there rages
good and bad in force engages
damn the reasons, fight the fight
steal the silence of the night
scream and kill and run them through
break the bonds of blood in two
for no more than foolish pride
pick a king and choose your side

Smell the powder from the guns
see the good sense as it runs
far away, a cowards act
plead for truce, a Satan's pact
break the back and gouge the eye
hear the spirits as they cry
bribe for peace with stolen gold
while the flags of hate unfold.

L. Carling c2005 [comments] => 8 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rakerman1999 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Rage

Contributed by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:33:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tortured mind, a war there rages
good and bad in force engages
damn the reasons, fight the fight
steal the silence of the night
scream and kill and run them through
break the bonds of blood in two
for no more than foolish pride
pick a king and choose your side

Smell the powder from the guns
see the good sense as it runs
far away, a cowards act
plead for truce, a Satan's pact
break the back and gouge the eye
hear the spirits as they cry
bribe for peace with stolen gold
while the flags of hate unfold.

L. Carling c2005

Copyright © Rakerman1999 ... [ 2005-05-12 16:33:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:54:06 PM AEST
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I can see where your coming from.
awsome write on this once again.
thanks for sharing.

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:15:15 PM AEST
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I believe war to always be "a Satan's pact."
It never brings peace. War only brings domination and more hatred.

Great piece, Larry,
Rita

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:16:11 PM AEST
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Great flow!!! I have to admit tho, I prefer your romantic writes...... This is good none the less...

Jenni

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:38:04 PM AEST
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Yes the ones that are romantic are sublime. Although you did a wonderful job writing this.

Fantastic

Love Angelxxxx

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 01:57:19 PM AEST
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Hmmm is this about war? or every day life?
I have a feeling its the latter.
Well crafted sir!!

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 06:44:08 PM AEST
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Makes a damned good amount of sense to me. Very well written, it does indeed feel this way sometimes.

*toasts with mead-horn*

Andrew

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 01:59:03 PM AEST
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Even if this is a little hard to understand, its still another amazing piece and the rhythmn is perfect, Just awesomely dark..

~Clark

Re: Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 01:51:31 AM AEST
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This was awesome Larry I love how
whatever subject you write about it turns out
equally good. The first two lines of the
second stanza just blew me away. A very
intense write here.

Bobo (Joel)

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