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Array ( [sid] => 94172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => far from me [time] => 2005-05-12 15:36:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => EVERY STEP I TAKE IS JUST ONE MORE MISTAKE
ADDED TO A LIST ATTACHED TO MY WRIST
REMINDING ME OF EVERY BEATH THAT I TAKE
HOW MANY MORE WILL I POSSIBLY MAKE
AS THE COLD BLADE RUNS ACROSS MY SKIN
I CAN FEEL THE RELIEF START TO SINK IN
ALL THE PAIN AND BLOOD RUNNING DOWN MY ARM
CALMS ME DOWN AND KEEPS ME UNHARMED INSIDE
WHY MUST I LIE WHY DO I TRY TO HIDE BEHIND MY FEARS
SHOWING MY WEAK SIDE WITH ALL MY TEARS
WITH EVERY SLICE BRINGS TEARS YEARS OF HOPES DREAMS DESIRES FEARS WANTING TO BE LOVED IN A WORLD SO DISTANT
NOT WANTING TO BE ONE OF THE NONCONSISTANT TRYING SO HARD TO PROVE MY SELF PLACING MY FELINGS HIGH ON A SHELF
WITH EVERY CUT AND EVERY SCAR PROVES TO ME IM NOT THAT FAR
FAR FROM HOPE FAR FROM DREAMS FAR FROM DESIRES FAR FROM ME NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ALL THE LIES AND DEMANDS NO ONE TO COMFORT ME AND TAKE MY HAND AS I LIE ON THE FLOOR CUTTING MORE AND MORE I FEEL ALIVE AND FREE I FEEL FOR ONCE THEY CANT TOUCH ME EVEN THOUGHT THEY DONT UNDERSTAND THEY CANT STOP ME FROM BEING ME
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sweetnsilentsoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

far from me

Contributed by sweetnsilentsoul on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

EVERY STEP I TAKE IS JUST ONE MORE MISTAKE
ADDED TO A LIST ATTACHED TO MY WRIST
REMINDING ME OF EVERY BEATH THAT I TAKE
HOW MANY MORE WILL I POSSIBLY MAKE
AS THE COLD BLADE RUNS ACROSS MY SKIN
I CAN FEEL THE RELIEF START TO SINK IN
ALL THE PAIN AND BLOOD RUNNING DOWN MY ARM
CALMS ME DOWN AND KEEPS ME UNHARMED INSIDE
WHY MUST I LIE WHY DO I TRY TO HIDE BEHIND MY FEARS
SHOWING MY WEAK SIDE WITH ALL MY TEARS
WITH EVERY SLICE BRINGS TEARS YEARS OF HOPES DREAMS DESIRES FEARS WANTING TO BE LOVED IN A WORLD SO DISTANT
NOT WANTING TO BE ONE OF THE NONCONSISTANT TRYING SO HARD TO PROVE MY SELF PLACING MY FELINGS HIGH ON A SHELF
WITH EVERY CUT AND EVERY SCAR PROVES TO ME IM NOT THAT FAR
FAR FROM HOPE FAR FROM DREAMS FAR FROM DESIRES FAR FROM ME NO ONE UNDERSTANDS ALL THE LIES AND DEMANDS NO ONE TO COMFORT ME AND TAKE MY HAND AS I LIE ON THE FLOOR CUTTING MORE AND MORE I FEEL ALIVE AND FREE I FEEL FOR ONCE THEY CANT TOUCH ME EVEN THOUGHT THEY DONT UNDERSTAND THEY CANT STOP ME FROM BEING ME

Copyright © sweetnsilentsoul ... [ 2005-05-12 15:36:30]
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Re: far from me (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:42:49 PM AEST
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i support you 100% of the whole "being me" part. but cutting isnt being yourself. cutting is allowing your demons to take over. i wish you the best of luck in all you do, the addiciton to cuting is bad, i know, but once you get over it you find being you so much more pleasent, and you learn to love yourself. hope your dreams arent too far away from reality! good write!

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