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Away from me you heartless soul,
Can you not taste my pain?
Please leave my bleed you’ve cut this hole,
There’s nothing left to gain,

Why flash her face to me each night?
Her smile keeps me awake!
I beg you leave these dreams from sight,
For scarlet water sake,

My withered smile wreaks envy,
With dry blue eyes that stare,
These broken words suit none but me,
I blink yet she’s still there,

Still dancing on my arteries,
Who miss my kidnapped heart,
You’re wings have smashed me to my knees,
My soul you’ve split apart,

Have mercy on this pleading chest,
I’ve lost the blood to bleed,
Come Jesus put my song at rest,
God hear this plea I plead,

But laughing Cupid sits and shoots,
His flaming arrows high!
My tears soaking both his boots,
I beg you leave me die,

This is not love, its Cupid’s kiss,
Lipstick mortality,
But damn that truth much worse than this,
The fact she loves not me.
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Mercy Cupid

Contributed by caleb on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic: Event



Mercy Cupid.

Away from me you heartless soul,
Can you not taste my pain?
Please leave my bleed you’ve cut this hole,
There’s nothing left to gain,

Why flash her face to me each night?
Her smile keeps me awake!
I beg you leave these dreams from sight,
For scarlet water sake,

My withered smile wreaks envy,
With dry blue eyes that stare,
These broken words suit none but me,
I blink yet she’s still there,

Still dancing on my arteries,
Who miss my kidnapped heart,
You’re wings have smashed me to my knees,
My soul you’ve split apart,

Have mercy on this pleading chest,
I’ve lost the blood to bleed,
Come Jesus put my song at rest,
God hear this plea I plead,

But laughing Cupid sits and shoots,
His flaming arrows high!
My tears soaking both his boots,
I beg you leave me die,

This is not love, its Cupid’s kiss,
Lipstick mortality,
But damn that truth much worse than this,
The fact she loves not me.




Copyright © caleb ... [ 2005-05-12 09:17:28]
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Re: Mercy Cupid (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:40:32 AM AEST
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Wow! What an entrance! Welcome to the site where we all become family to you eventually. :-)
This poem has a great flow and the rhyme is ceaseless. It works the wording perfectly and the point is, love sometimes hurts.
I really liked this and look forward to reading more of your work!
Angel always...godspeed...joni


Re: Mercy Cupid (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:11:21 AM AEST
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Very very stylin' write! You've a strong sense of rhyme, wordplay and imagery. I'm glad i read this one and most definitely look forward to more good stuff.




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