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Hanging, swinging back and fourth
Suffocating in the empty source

I don’t want the help you’ll give
To fix my head, don’t want to live

It’s my choice
To sound my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

The end is near without the breathing
Rid me of the falling feeling

I just want the Other Side
Smells a lot like suicide

It’s my decision
End the division
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

Dry your eyes, please don’t cry
Give forgiveness one last try

Soul mate, we will never truly end
Give in to wherever we will descend

It’s my choice
To stop my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

Jesus condescending me
His decision to ever let me be free

I have no place to wait and hide
Oh, this smells a lot like suicide

Smells like suicide
Smells like suicide
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Smells Like Suicide

Contributed by Vermilion on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hanging, swinging back and fourth
Suffocating in the empty source

I don’t want the help you’ll give
To fix my head, don’t want to live

It’s my choice
To sound my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

The end is near without the breathing
Rid me of the falling feeling

I just want the Other Side
Smells a lot like suicide

It’s my decision
End the division
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

Dry your eyes, please don’t cry
Give forgiveness one last try

Soul mate, we will never truly end
Give in to wherever we will descend

It’s my choice
To stop my voice
And I don’t care about myself
Not anymore

Jesus condescending me
His decision to ever let me be free

I have no place to wait and hide
Oh, this smells a lot like suicide

Smells like suicide
Smells like suicide

Copyright Â© Vermilion ... [ 2005-05-12 05:53:46]
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Re: Smells Like Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:27:21 AM AEST
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Very dark write, it was really, really good. Look forward to more for sure. Keep it up!

Re: Smells Like Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by MaggotsGoneWild on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:56:07 PM AEST
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Love the name. Got the idea from Nirvana I see. Very dark Love it ^-^

Re: Smells Like Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 07:25:28 PM AEST
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i really like this poem.

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