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Array ( [sid] => 94124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My One Time With You [time] => 2005-05-12 03:10:21 [hometext] => This one's for Chris [bodytext] => I was driving around
With nothing to do
But that was when
I first met you

Your big black truck
With your dirtbikes in the back
On your way home
From training at the track

I got your number
As we stoped at the light
You said to call in half an hour
And we would hang out that night

30 minutes later
You did'nt pick up the phone
So I was like scew it
And spent the night at home

Later that next day
You called and we hung out
That was when I got to know
What you were all about

A semi-pro supercross racer
With lots of sponsors and a free truck
Almost to good to be true
Ya, that would be my luck

"You are so beautiful"
Is what you kept saying to me
"I cant believe I found a girl like you!"
As you kissed me agresivly

We made out for hours
And things were moving fast
Then you told me it wouldent go further
Cause you wanted this to last

We drove around and took walks
And made out in the grass
We fooled around and got lost
As time seemed to swiftly pass

Things were going perfect
Up untill you told me you had to leave
"I go in 3 days and I'll be back in 2 weeks"
Wow, this was to much to retrieve

I found out you are rarely home
And a pro you would soon be
A player is what it was starting to look like
i just hope it doesnt happen to me

I don't want this to be the last I see of you
Because I can actually see you and I together
Maybe we would only be together a month
Who knows, it could turn out to be forever! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 43 [informant] => wetnwild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
My One Time With You

Contributed by wetnwild on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 03:10:21 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



I was driving around
With nothing to do
But that was when
I first met you

Your big black truck
With your dirtbikes in the back
On your way home
From training at the track

I got your number
As we stoped at the light
You said to call in half an hour
And we would hang out that night

30 minutes later
You did'nt pick up the phone
So I was like scew it
And spent the night at home

Later that next day
You called and we hung out
That was when I got to know
What you were all about

A semi-pro supercross racer
With lots of sponsors and a free truck
Almost to good to be true
Ya, that would be my luck

"You are so beautiful"
Is what you kept saying to me
"I cant believe I found a girl like you!"
As you kissed me agresivly

We made out for hours
And things were moving fast
Then you told me it wouldent go further
Cause you wanted this to last

We drove around and took walks
And made out in the grass
We fooled around and got lost
As time seemed to swiftly pass

Things were going perfect
Up untill you told me you had to leave
"I go in 3 days and I'll be back in 2 weeks"
Wow, this was to much to retrieve

I found out you are rarely home
And a pro you would soon be
A player is what it was starting to look like
i just hope it doesnt happen to me

I don't want this to be the last I see of you
Because I can actually see you and I together
Maybe we would only be together a month
Who knows, it could turn out to be forever!




Copyright © wetnwild ... [ 2005-05-12 03:10:21]
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Re: My One Time With You (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:24:09 AM AEST
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Well I hope all works out with this and yes it is hard to have a relationship were the person is always gone believe me I know. But I hope all goes well and everything works out. Just be careful guys can be evil I know I am one. I hope that if you stay with him that he doesn’t try and play you. I hope for you that love finds its place and that you can be truly happy. Take care and thank you for sharing these words and your story with all who read….Steve




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