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Array ( [sid] => 94111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With Bunnies And Rainbows [time] => 2005-05-11 23:08:47 [hometext] => And puppies and candy canes too... [bodytext] => I've done this once before and now I'm doing it again
In a year I'll regret I ever picked up this pen
But I can't ***** stand
The ***** you ***** said
I need to kill the misconceptions loitering in your head
Lets start with what
You were so sad to say
Could have been beautiful
But I had to go away
Yeah, love is overrated as you seem to persist
You just want the "true" kind
Oh wait! That doesn't exist
This isn't a romance novel or a cheap Hollywood show
Everything ends with, "We can still be friends, you know"
My vice was so demanding
It made you so depressed
Shut up! You ***** me!
You didn't need help to undress
Yes, you opened up your vault way too ***** soon
But I was the first who could make you ***** croon
Night in, night out
Almost every ***** time
By the way, it was a lie when I said I got mine
You should of took that picture
And sent it to your dad
So he could see you choking on the best you've ever had
But its not like he'd care
Not even a little bit
He abandoned you years ago
Like he'd give a *****
That you moved to Arkansas
And dropped out of school (again)
Added another finger
Too many to fool
Yourself, that you're still innocent
And pray for god's love
Don't even pretend; you believe in a one above
You need him to forgive you
For everything you can't forget
All the bad little things that you wish you didn't commit
So add me to your list
Heap me with your sins
Add me to your mistakes and feel violated within
Just curl in the darkness and realize, so cold
That all this time
I've just been ***** painted gold
Feel all the regret, feel the remorse
You never knew anything
And you'll continue down that course

So swallow all the truth
Encased in all my rage
Its all displayed before you
All for you to gauge
I just couldn't resist
Tossing you my two cents
So go on and scrawl
Your ***** off comment
(*****)
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With Bunnies And Rainbows

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:08:47 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I've done this once before and now I'm doing it again
In a year I'll regret I ever picked up this pen
But I can't ***** stand
The ***** you ***** said
I need to kill the misconceptions loitering in your head
Lets start with what
You were so sad to say
Could have been beautiful
But I had to go away
Yeah, love is overrated as you seem to persist
You just want the "true" kind
Oh wait! That doesn't exist
This isn't a romance novel or a cheap Hollywood show
Everything ends with, "We can still be friends, you know"
My vice was so demanding
It made you so depressed
Shut up! You ***** me!
You didn't need help to undress
Yes, you opened up your vault way too ***** soon
But I was the first who could make you ***** croon
Night in, night out
Almost every ***** time
By the way, it was a lie when I said I got mine
You should of took that picture
And sent it to your dad
So he could see you choking on the best you've ever had
But its not like he'd care
Not even a little bit
He abandoned you years ago
Like he'd give a *****
That you moved to Arkansas
And dropped out of school (again)
Added another finger
Too many to fool
Yourself, that you're still innocent
And pray for god's love
Don't even pretend; you believe in a one above
You need him to forgive you
For everything you can't forget
All the bad little things that you wish you didn't commit
So add me to your list
Heap me with your sins
Add me to your mistakes and feel violated within
Just curl in the darkness and realize, so cold
That all this time
I've just been ***** painted gold
Feel all the regret, feel the remorse
You never knew anything
And you'll continue down that course

So swallow all the truth
Encased in all my rage
Its all displayed before you
All for you to gauge
I just couldn't resist
Tossing you my two cents
So go on and scrawl
Your ***** off comment
(*****)




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Re: With Bunnies And Rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:49:01 PM AEST
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Wow! Huge Poem! so much in it! really great write....


Re: With Bunnies And Rainbows (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonOrgazm on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:05:29 AM AEST
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oooh.. such rage..




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