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Array ( [sid] => 94072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your someone [time] => 2005-05-11 18:20:01 [hometext] => To a guy i really like, he is a good guy and he cares about me, and would you plz tell me if i should send it so plz comment!!! [bodytext] => Your the one that filled my heart when
it was empty and cold, and your the one
that made realize there may be another
love out there for me, besides him.

Your the first one that told me to
stop cutting myself and told me that
you didnt want me to do that cuz you
cared for me, and made me promise that
i wouldnt do it anymore, i hold that promise
close to my heart you mean so much to me.

I care for you like i cared for him, the one
i loved for so long, the one i said i would
never get over until you came into my life,
and told me that you cared for me and said
you wanted to take it slow, cuz you like
to fall in love just like i do.

Your special to my heart, i want you and
you only no other, i just wish i could tell
you what i feel without scaring you off,
i am not fully in love with you but i know
my feelings for you are right.

I want to hold you, feel your gentle
lips against mine, i dont want it to be
a disapointment that i went out with
you like i did with him, your worth
fighting for, and i will fight until
i get what i want.

I just thought i would let you know
you are someone special to my heart
and for you i would stop my cutting and
say i would do no more, i just want my
dreams to come true and be with you,
for now on until we are done.

To: Mike Durst
From: Kimmie [comments] => 6 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 33 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Your someone

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:20:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Your the one that filled my heart when
it was empty and cold, and your the one
that made realize there may be another
love out there for me, besides him.

Your the first one that told me to
stop cutting myself and told me that
you didnt want me to do that cuz you
cared for me, and made me promise that
i wouldnt do it anymore, i hold that promise
close to my heart you mean so much to me.

I care for you like i cared for him, the one
i loved for so long, the one i said i would
never get over until you came into my life,
and told me that you cared for me and said
you wanted to take it slow, cuz you like
to fall in love just like i do.

Your special to my heart, i want you and
you only no other, i just wish i could tell
you what i feel without scaring you off,
i am not fully in love with you but i know
my feelings for you are right.

I want to hold you, feel your gentle
lips against mine, i dont want it to be
a disapointment that i went out with
you like i did with him, your worth
fighting for, and i will fight until
i get what i want.

I just thought i would let you know
you are someone special to my heart
and for you i would stop my cutting and
say i would do no more, i just want my
dreams to come true and be with you,
for now on until we are done.

To: Mike Durst
From: Kimmie

Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-05-11 18:20:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:28:42 PM AEST
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Very cool poem, I say go for it, what have you got to lose?

Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:15:33 PM AEST
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Kimmie, I say 'absolutely' send it to him. You have to take some chances in life and if you care this much for him, let him know. Good luck.

Rita

Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by hoist1atca on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:52:04 PM AEST
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Hi-
Good poem-
I donot post here much anymore as the words that once came to me in an instant have now all but come to a trickle but I do like to come in and read so many of the great poems that are here-
I give no advice except this...always follow your heart for it is true to you...Allow no one to change the words that you write...And always write with your heart and not your thoughts as thoughts sometimes change but feelings always remain the same (only the way we think about them change)...
Take some time to read the poems I have posted here, maybe they will show you a path to follow...
Joe

Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by SPSM on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:38:51 AM AEST
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I'll say this, if you and he feel this strongly about each other, then send the poem. He'll appreciate the fact that you thought enough about it to express it in words.
SharonM

Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:19:58 AM AEST
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Very beautiful..your thoughts are your words
and the answer to your question is in your poem..
When we feel that way for someone it has to be told,
For we never know what tomorrow holds..
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Your someone (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:10:35 PM AEST
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Your words are so stong i can feel them.............You have to always let the ones in your life know how you feel and ya never know maybe he feels just as strong as you but is to scared to tell you..............it would be ashame to pass up your soulmate without even a word go for it hun and keep up the great work!

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