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I know the attitude you had when we were kids

I thought that you were my friend
Some one I could depend

I got sick of all the lies
The kind that make friendships die

Thought that I must trust you
Now I must crush you

Change it
Rearrange it

You spend time living in vein
Get away your just like a stain

I tried bleach and I tried shout
But I can't get the dumb thing out!

But baby, if that’s the way you want to be
Just make sure you stay the hell away from me
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Ba Kkwah (change it)

Contributed by Wiccan on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I remember all the things you did
I know the attitude you had when we were kids

I thought that you were my friend
Some one I could depend

I got sick of all the lies
The kind that make friendships die

Thought that I must trust you
Now I must crush you

Change it
Rearrange it

You spend time living in vein
Get away your just like a stain

I tried bleach and I tried shout
But I can't get the dumb thing out!

But baby, if that’s the way you want to be
Just make sure you stay the hell away from me

Copyright Â© Wiccan ... [ 2002-12-29 15:40:00]
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Re: Ba Kkwah (change it) (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:37:12 PM AEST
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Awww Wiccan this is so sad...this one brought tears to my eyes i think that it's sad when friends do one another this way, my heart is right there.....i usually have been one to run away from true friendship that got to close to me...this reminds me why i do ....thank you for sharing your beautiful writings....this one touched me deeply...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Ba Kkwah (change it) (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:16:38 PM AEST
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Dearest Wiccan @-<-<<-
An Excellent write my friend, lol@ the bleach and shout hehe Good on you having a sense of humour amist the pain..
Your friend always Nessa

Re: Ba Kkwah (change it) (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 02:49:24 AM AEST
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well sculptured. very nicely drawn and painted. I appreciate this type of poetic craftsmanship...Venkat

Re: Ba Kkwah (change it) (User Rating: 1 )
by rapnificent on Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 12:01:41 PM AEST
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Emotional read; very blunt and flowing. An attention grabber.

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