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Array ( [sid] => 94029 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Darkening Heartbreak [time] => 2005-05-11 10:21:49 [hometext] => two shades darker than grey about heartache... [bodytext] => my penniless old wish
i'm like all these cold fish
with long gazing eyes
cold stares at the skies

my morning is pale grey
tree silhouette say
what do you want God?
my bark and a soft nod?

so my colors do blend
to madness descend
kaleidoscope faces
my head's in dark places

this basement is cold
my warmth i have sold
to bugs and disease
no leaves on my trees

she's my cold turkey
i need her my turnkey
to bring me to life
unlocking warm light...

...cause i'm in a cellar. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => In_a_While [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Darkening Heartbreak

Contributed by In_a_While on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:21:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

my penniless old wish
i'm like all these cold fish
with long gazing eyes
cold stares at the skies

my morning is pale grey
tree silhouette say
what do you want God?
my bark and a soft nod?

so my colors do blend
to madness descend
kaleidoscope faces
my head's in dark places

this basement is cold
my warmth i have sold
to bugs and disease
no leaves on my trees

she's my cold turkey
i need her my turnkey
to bring me to life
unlocking warm light...

...cause i'm in a cellar.

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-05-11 10:21:49]
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Re: Darkening Heartbreak (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:54:32 PM AEST
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This was a good write but it took me two reads to capture everything in it. You write so much right now its much enjoyed. I’ve had writers block and haven’t been able to put anything out. the last stanza was good and had a deeper meaning in a way. well done on this one. Take care my friend and keep writing….Steve

Re: Darkening Heartbreak (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 02:41:03 AM AEST
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awww.... hugs n' love, nessa

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