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Array ( [sid] => 94004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HATE is merely an under statement for you jean. [time] => 2005-05-11 05:19:18 [hometext] => I won’t explain this ‘coz as I said in the poem, Jean isn’t even worth my strength! I hate her, and that’s all there is to it! Please comment on this though, even if you don’t like it... And oh yeah, Jean was my foster mum. [bodytext] => Lows are thickly imbedded with in.
I HATE you jean! I can’t forgive.
You’ve rejected me so with Richard I live.
May god himself, NEVER forgive!

I took your words and held your lows.
I ignored how you gambled and watched it grow.
I tore my self up just to melt my hurt.
But I felt myself rot when you treated me like dirt…

You struck me deep on a number of times.
And I couldn’t eat as I fell through time…
… And I hope you didn’t mean it, when you said it’s my fault,
That YOU’RE niece cut too when you neglected us both.

But some where inside I know you meant it.
‘Coz you’re too screwed up, just to except.
That I tried to kill myself ‘coz I couldn’t stand it.
And YOU pulled it on me and led me to it…

That YOU told lies to make things seem ok.
And YOU pushed YOUR front at me when what I said I wasn’t happy.
And YOU through away the money you were given to look after me.
… And YOU may have got better but STILL through things in my face…

I took what I absorbed but barely told any one.
And YOU took some advantage with the icy death of your mum.
And I know it was hard for you trying to continue when you were down.
But you could have got some help; you have to prevent the way things worked out…

… And yeah I took an over dose, and you were all ‘shocked’.
And YOU could barely except that I carved ‘hate me’ when I cut.
… And now you just don’t want me. You-just-don’t-care.
But I already knew that, even though you said you’d ALWAYS be here…!

And I don’t know what-to-say-to-you.
YOU know YOU should get help!
But I know you won’t…
And it’s why I did this to my-self…
And I can continue grieving,
Crying over YOU.
But YOU’RE not worth my strength!
MAY-YOU-ROT-IN-HELL! I-HATE-YOU!

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
HATE is merely an under statement for you jean.

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:19:18 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



Lows are thickly imbedded with in.
I HATE you jean! I can’t forgive.
You’ve rejected me so with Richard I live.
May god himself, NEVER forgive!

I took your words and held your lows.
I ignored how you gambled and watched it grow.
I tore my self up just to melt my hurt.
But I felt myself rot when you treated me like dirt…

You struck me deep on a number of times.
And I couldn’t eat as I fell through time…
… And I hope you didn’t mean it, when you said it’s my fault,
That YOU’RE niece cut too when you neglected us both.

But some where inside I know you meant it.
‘Coz you’re too screwed up, just to except.
That I tried to kill myself ‘coz I couldn’t stand it.
And YOU pulled it on me and led me to it…

That YOU told lies to make things seem ok.
And YOU pushed YOUR front at me when what I said I wasn’t happy.
And YOU through away the money you were given to look after me.
… And YOU may have got better but STILL through things in my face…

I took what I absorbed but barely told any one.
And YOU took some advantage with the icy death of your mum.
And I know it was hard for you trying to continue when you were down.
But you could have got some help; you have to prevent the way things worked out…

… And yeah I took an over dose, and you were all ‘shocked’.
And YOU could barely except that I carved ‘hate me’ when I cut.
… And now you just don’t want me. You-just-don’t-care.
But I already knew that, even though you said you’d ALWAYS be here…!

And I don’t know what-to-say-to-you.
YOU know YOU should get help!
But I know you won’t…
And it’s why I did this to my-self…
And I can continue grieving,
Crying over YOU.
But YOU’RE not worth my strength!
MAY-YOU-ROT-IN-HELL! I-HATE-YOU!





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Re: HATE is merely an under statement for you jean. (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 06:48:38 AM AEST
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Hate destroys the hater.
"Love your enemy"
Pray for their soul
and that doesn't mean
you have to even like them.

I found your poem sad
I see you were mistreated
There is too much here for me to understand.

Pray "God" if you are--Lead me to where You want me.
May you find peace and love in your life.

Sinned



Re: HATE is merely an under statement for you jean. (User Rating: 1 )
by Absent on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:26:45 PM AEST
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It may not seem like much coming from a complete stranger, but I believe I know EXACTLY how you feel. I came from an abusive home myself and I completely understand your anger, frustration, and sense of hopelessness. I relate to every word of this poem and I thought it was a wonderful expression of your emotions. I believe it is good to express hatred in writing so that it doesn't bubble out in a more hurtful form. But even then it doesn't always help as is conveyed in your poem. My deepest condolences for your plight and do try to keep your head up ^^. Good job love.

-S.o.S-




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