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Tears never stop falling from my crushed eye
My bleeding heart just cannot pretend
I am lost without you till my life’s end
Maybe one day I may feel for another
Though never in the way I love you my lost lover

Never got the chance so through
My poetry I bid you farewell
Goodbye my sweet I do hope
You are happy and well

Every day is sorrowful my life is so mundane
Once you took my heart nothing was the same

I do miss you so
Till the hour I die
Just hold me
You make me cry
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You Make Me Cry

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:42:04 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

You’re nowhere near but you still make me cry
Tears never stop falling from my crushed eye
My bleeding heart just cannot pretend
I am lost without you till my life’s end
Maybe one day I may feel for another
Though never in the way I love you my lost lover

Never got the chance so through
My poetry I bid you farewell
Goodbye my sweet I do hope
You are happy and well

Every day is sorrowful my life is so mundane
Once you took my heart nothing was the same

I do miss you so
Till the hour I die
Just hold me
You make me cry

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-05-11 00:42:04]
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Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:52:45 AM AEST
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This poem makes me want to cry.. cause I lost someone who i loved and he was my boyfriend and he died.. he drowned.. and i have missed him so much .. i always cry . i am lost without him .. it isnt the same anymore scents i dont have him in it .. its differnt with me now scents he died, icant stop crying i miss him so much.. i did like this poem it was very good. but sad.

Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 01:01:16 AM AEST
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hi
sad and yet good poem,i know what you feel like,so much emotion.I went through this too and still can't seem to get over it,its so hard and its like a scar.well dude,don't wanna keep on going,its not a freakin essay,lol.well,t/c and keep your head up,things will sort out.lates.
love always,
andrea

Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 03:05:01 AM AEST
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You are really good. I'm sorry for your loss.

Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:07:12 AM AEST
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This is a great right! It is exactly what i'm feeling and thinking right this very moment!
Thank you so much for sharing this! :)

Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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i'm sorry...that last comment must've made me look so dumb!! it is WAY past my bedtime!!...i meant "WRITE" instead of "right"...lol....i HATE making spelling mistakes..and that was a real dumb one! sorry!...sleep deprived!

Re: You Make Me Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaser on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:43:21 PM AEST
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that was deep. Heartbreak is overwhelming and hard to describe, but you managed to capture it. awesome job, but im sorry for any pain you feel. Through time and prayer all of that can get better. great job

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