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Array ( [sid] => 93970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Find it in Another Day [time] => 2005-05-10 21:44:30 [hometext] => This is the poem after [bodytext] => A block in me has fallen into place,
Satisfaction from your words,
The verbal embrace,
Lets leave it at that,
Because to hurt, is to chase.

The embrace,
“...a nice guy”,
I wish I had won the race.
But now with tears in my eyes,
I must let you fly.

And now I know,
Against my will,
I must let you go.

Its not because I didn’t love you,
But rather a sacrifice I made because of you,
Its not with every girl that I behave this way.
So remember me, while I fade from you, into the rain.

In a moment you showed me the light of day.
Broke the clouds,
And gave me wings of sorrow to fly away,
Now I must find my dream on another day.

Everything will be ok,
And I still flower from what you say,
Life is beautiful,
But we all must find our own way.

~Dan Freilich [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Chymaster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Find it in Another Day

Contributed by Chymaster on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:44:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A block in me has fallen into place,
Satisfaction from your words,
The verbal embrace,
Lets leave it at that,
Because to hurt, is to chase.

The embrace,
“...a nice guy”,
I wish I had won the race.
But now with tears in my eyes,
I must let you fly.

And now I know,
Against my will,
I must let you go.

Its not because I didn’t love you,
But rather a sacrifice I made because of you,
Its not with every girl that I behave this way.
So remember me, while I fade from you, into the rain.

In a moment you showed me the light of day.
Broke the clouds,
And gave me wings of sorrow to fly away,
Now I must find my dream on another day.

Everything will be ok,
And I still flower from what you say,
Life is beautiful,
But we all must find our own way.

~Dan Freilich

Copyright Â© Chymaster ... [ 2005-05-10 21:44:30]
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Re: Find it in Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 09:53:28 PM AEST
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A nice beautifull poem, good work. SLipSiX.

Re: Find it in Another Day (User Rating: 1 )
by justice on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 03:12:32 PM AEST
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this was a well written poem. I loved the way you placed the words together in order to a verbal picture of what you wanted to say. Nice job!!

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